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| 文章出处：网友投稿 发布时间：2005-10-11 |
最初的联系信1
Jiao Dianshi
Dept. of Entertainment
Tsinghua University
Beijing 111001
People’s Republic of China
Sept. 31, 1998
Graduate Admissions Committee
Department of Fancy Discipline
Nice & Beautiful University
101 Hollywood Boulevard
Los Angeles, CA 10090
United States of America
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am a lecturer teaching video production at the Tsinghua University of China, one of the country’s leading institutions of higher learning. I now wish to scale higher intellectual heights by pursuing advanced studies in a quality graduate program at an American university. Towards that end, I am writing to ask for a package of your application documents. Your timely assistance will be greatly appreciated.
I did my undergraduate studies at the Tsinghua University, where I now teach, and obtained a Master’s Degree in 1996 at the Beijing Institute of Broadcasting, the best higher-learning institution of its kind in China. In the past two years, I have been serving as a popular teacher of television shooting and the making of documentary films. In this capacity, I have publis
hed a number of research papers concerning China’s booming media industry.
As I try to ground myself more solidly in my teaching and research career, I need to broaden my vision and perspectives. Checking into the Peterson’s Guide and other sources, I have found that your university offers the kind of graduate program that caters to my type of research interests. It is therefore hoped that this letter will start me off in a process that will lead to my enrolment in your program next year.
Yours sincerely
Jiao Dianshi
最初的联系信2
Chen Xuemin
P.O. Box 4444
Northern Industrial University
Beijing 100085
E-Mail: chenxue@mail.niu.edu.cn
Apr. 31, 1998
Graduate School
University of Wonders
London N55 44G
United Kingdom
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am a Chinese student due to graduate this year with a B.S. from the Computer Department of the Northern Industrial University, a distinguished higher-learning institution based in Beijing, China’s capital. I would like to apply for acceptance into your graduate program so that I can further my training in my chosen fiel
d of studies. All your assistance will be highly appreciated.
I was born in 1976 in Liaoning, the country’s most industrialized province, with a population of about 40 million. My education began in 1983 in my hometown Liaoyang’s Nanlinzi Primary School. I did so well at Nanlinzi that I won admission in 1986 into the Liaoning Experiemental Primary School, which groups together the province’s best and brightest children. It was at the Liaoning Experimental Primary School that I set out to learn computer programming with the BASIC language at only 11 years of age, which is quite unusual among Chinese children even today. In 1988, I moved on into the Liaoning Experimental Middle School, the cream of the province’s high schools. In this middle school, I persevered in enhancing my computer expertise, which enabled me to win the championship at a contest of computer knowledge that involved all the high schools in Shenyang, the capital of Liaoning.
My schooling at the province’s best high school paid off in 1994. That year, I gained acceptance into the Northern Industr
ial University on the strength of my impressive grades in the highly competitive National University Entrance Examinations, which are held annually nationwide to screen high school graduates for university education. In the four years since, I have been receiving systematic and comprehensive training in computer science, taking courses ranging from discrete mathematics, fundamentals of combinatorics, introduction to mathematical logic, assembly language, C language, data structure, compiler design theory, operating system, computer architecture and organization, to fundamentals of computer networks.
Meanwhile, I have also endeavored to improve my English proficiency. Recently, I took the TOFEL and GRE tests. Although the scores are still pending, I believe that they will be good.
I now would very much like to expand the horizon and insights that my education so far has endowed in me. Towards that end, I have checked around for a good Western university to go to. Judging by all that I know, I think your university suits my purpose the best. It would be a great privilege for me if I could join your&nbs
p;graduate program to advance my training. Please send me an application package and all other material I might need to apply for acceptance.
Yours sincerely,
Chen Xuemin
最初的联系信修改稿
本信较长，是个颇极端的例子。由于原作者坚持要写满一页，所以改后稿也甚长。其实这么多文字很可能浪费了。这样一封用于索取资料的信，目的仅是要对方对自己产生兴趣，然后把申请和介绍材料寄给自己。一般来说，这种信不必要太长，也不必太详细地介绍自己，更不必要设计与自己学术能力无关的内容。当然，也不要使用Dear Leadership这种话，听起来让人起鸡皮疙瘩。
Dear President and Leadership,
My name is Tai Changle, I will graduate from Computer Department of Chinese Northern Industrial University this year. I would like to apply for further study as graduate student at your University. I took forward to your permission and reply. Here is my resume as following:
I was born in Liaoyang city of Liaoning Province, China, in June 10, 1976. I studied at the Nanlinzi Primary School in my home town from September 1983 to June 1986, at the Provincial Testing Primary School of Liaoning Province in Shenyang City from June 1986 to July 1988, at the provincial Testing Middle School of Liaoning Province In Shenyang City from September 1988 to February 1992, at the Middle School attached at the People’s University of China in Beijing from February&nb
sp;1992 to July 1994. Since September 1994, I became an undergraduate at the Northern Industrial University of China in Beijing.
When I was 11 years old, I began to study BASIC language programming. In middle school, I kept on studying computer knowledge in my spare time, and won a championship at the competition of computer knowledge in which the students from all excellent High Schools in Shenyang City took part.
In the last four years, I have learned the courses on computer systematically, including Discrete Mathematics, Fundamentals of Combinatorics Introduction to Mathematical Logic, Assembly Language, C Language, Data Structure, Compiler Design Theory, Operating System, Computer Architecture and Organization, Fundamentals of Computer Networks and So on.
In the mean time, I took the TOFEL and GRE test. Last year, I got a license for drivers.
My four years undergraduate life is very wonderful and meaningful, it has expanded my horizon. I long for the chance to learn more knowledge. ## is the best university in my mind. I wish I could study at your University in the future.
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Sincerely,
和教授取得联系的信件
Chaoyang District
Beijing, 100021
P.R. China
Dec 8, 1996
Dear Professor Aki:
I am a master degree holder applying to your department for a Doctoral Degree program beginning in fall, 1994. I have already mailed application documents to Queen’s University.
My major is computer theory with focus on algorithms and cryptography. I have known you since I took part in a seminar discussing your book Design and Analysis of Parallel Algorithms, which greatly enhances my interest in parallel computation. I have also read some papers of yours concerning computer security, for example, the View for Multilevel Database Security collaborated with Denning et al. My master thesis is on multilevel database security. In the thesis I combined database security with cryptography, and got some results on cryptographic key management.
I am very interested in the areas of parallel algorithms and data security, and longing to continue my study in these areas. Since you are a well known specialist in these areas, I believe that it will be very helpful to my academic
career if I have the chance to continue my research work under your advice.
Enclosed are some materials outlining my previous education and academic objectives. You may have more knowledge about me through these materials.
I sincerely hope that you can consider my request and accept me as one of your students.
Sincerely yours.
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