考研英语备考很多事情都要提上日程了，看看哪些是该注意的，下面由出国留学网小编为你精心准备了“2021考研英语：写作的高效技巧”，持续关注本站将可以持续获取更多的考试资讯!
2021考研英语：写作的高效技巧
一、研习
研习主要侧重两个方面，包括文章章法和语言表达。文章章法指文章的行文思路、布局谋篇、结构安排、逻辑顺序。许多考研学子面对一个话题，可能存在两种不同的困惑，一是下笔千言，但离题万里;二是思绪万千，却无从落笔。所谓研习，需要有独立思考和个人的判断，本着“他山之石，可以攻玉”的精神，汲取文章的精华部分加以研究。下面就一篇文章给大家进行以下研习的练习。
Directions:
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)
【高分范文】
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource. Actually, water resource is very limited and precious. It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①. Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap.
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②. For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users. Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others. In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③. Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture. And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water.
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken. On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water. On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted. To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring.
【佳作翻译】
水资源一度被误认为是一种无限的可再生资源，实际上，水资源是非常有限且宝贵的。 有幸的是现在公众开始关注这一问题了。如图所示，一只可爱的快乐小猪存钱罐积攒着水龙 头里流出的每一滴水，就像存钱一样。
然而，水资源短缺问题仍然威胁着全人类的生存和发展。浪费水的现象在日常生活中仍然随处可见。例如，经常有粗心大意者忘记关水龙头。更有甚者认为自己缴了水费就有权浪费，与他人无关。事实上，水资源不仅在生活中必不可少，在工农业生产中也是不可或缺的。 水资源是全人类共同的财富，很难想象当没有水的时候世界会是什么样子。
虽然越来越多的人已经认识到了这种紧迫性，但是仍然要采取进一步的措施。从宏观层 面上讲，全世界应该共同努力反对浪费水。从微观层面上讲，要进行广泛的宣传活动。比如 在电视台播出关于如何节水的节目。节约用水就是存储幸福，只有节约用水才能为子孙后代 存储更好的生活。
【佳作研习】
① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 来自于 2005 年阅读真题，原句是这样的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。历年真题是一座巨大的宝库，广大考生一定要学会充分利用这宝贵的资源!
② 第二段开头，用了一个转折词，也就是“起承转合”中的所谓的“转”，把这篇作文改造成了一篇社会问题型作文，也就是大家最擅长写的作文。
③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒装句， 表语提前，句子倒装。
倒装句写法：
第一步：写正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。
第二步：表语 precious 提前。
第三步：主谓倒置，变成 So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。 普通的 so…that…句型，也能被化腐朽为神奇，成为钻石加分句型!
④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替换 important 的一个很好的词汇。
顺便讲一个英译汉的技巧：大家可以看到，在译文中，这句话被翻译两次：必不可少、 不可或缺。 因为原文中出现了：not only…but also，所以这个单词被拆开翻译成了两个近义词， 以使行文更加通顺。
⑤ what the world would be like：注意宾语从句必须用陈述语序。
⑥ become aware of: 意识到。意思和用法都等同于 be conscious of。后边接词语。
二、仿写
当我们对上面这篇文章经过了认真的研习之后，在自己写文章时，应有意识地调用以前的积累，正向迁移，融入自己的写作，包括语言表达、文章章法、写作技巧等，最终达到学以致用的目的。包括大家生活中见到优秀的表达，比如：Not that I loved Caesar less， but that I loved Rome more. (不是我爱凯撒浅，而是我爱罗马深。)这样的经典名句，当写作有关英语学习的文章时不妨模仿这个句式： Not that we can’t master English， but that we have not been willing to take pains.(不是我们不能掌握英语，而是我们不愿付出努力。) 模仿与借鉴为写作所必须。
总之，Good writing favors the prepared mind.(好的写作总是照顾那些有准备的人)。
2021考研英语：作文亮点句子总结
一、亮眼首句
1、 As is symbolically illustrated in the cartoon …
2、As is shown in the pie chart…
这两个句式用as引导的非限定性定语从句引出图画或图表内容，意为"漫画以象征的手法为我们阐述了一个观点……"，"正如饼状图显示的那样……"。
3、From the picture we can see…
该句式中的亮点是将介词短语做状语置于句首，不影响句子的整体结构。
4、 Portrayed in the set of drawings above are/is…
5、Emerging from the drawing is a miracle:…
6、 Described by the bar chart above are/is…
这三个句式都是倒装结构，非常漂亮。放在篇首，能够在茫茫考卷中，吸引阅读组老师的眼球，分数定会提升。
7、The cartoonist laid out the image elaborately, placing...at the center of picture.
8、 The implication conveyed in the cartoon is that…
这两个句式中使用了分词结构placing…和conveyed。大家在学考研语法时，知道分词结构是考研英语中的核心考点。如果在写作中能够灵活运用这一核心考点，阅读组老师自然会觉得咱们考生功底深厚，作文定能得到理想分数。
9、The photo exhibits us an eye-catching scene:…
该句式用特殊标点符号(冒号)引出图画描述的具体内容。这样的句式，比较方便，考生使用起来比较灵活。
首段图画或图表内容描述清楚后，一定要在作文中提出自己对该现象或者哲理的看法或观点，这样的作文才有深度。
一想到提出看法、观点，同学们脑海中立刻浮现的句式" in my opinion"," from my point of view"，"as far as I am concerned"…。这些句式太过于平凡，无法让阅卷组老师眼前一亮。那怎样让阅卷组老师欢喜呢?以下几个句式，供大家学习：
(1)It is undeniable that…(不可否认……)
(2) It is obvious that…(明显的是……)
(3) It occurs to me that…(我想到……)
(4) I give my vote to the former/ the latter opinion. (我同意前者/后者的观点)
(5) be supported by sound reasons(有充分的理由支持)
(6)As the proverb goes…(正如谚语所说……)‘’
二、点睛尾句
1、It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to...
例句：It is hoped that we should pay more attention to the problems of unemployment.
2、Only in this way/only when/only through..., will/can we...
例句：It is only if all sides of society take their roles fully that we will achieve the society we want.
3、 As long as..., we will be able to.../the problems is bound to...
例句：As long as we persist in spreading scientific knowledge among the masses, all the superstitions are bound to go out of our life.
4、In the course of time/In a long run/In the long term, sth. is more likely/bound/sure to...
例句：In a long run, the practice of birth control is believed to do a great benefit to the future of China.
5、In a word, there is every/little chance/probability/possibility that...in time to come.
例句：In a word, there is every chance that this wise move in economic construction will acquire a broader significance in time to come.
6、Anything/anyone that/who...will have to...
例句：Anyone who has a strong bias against China will have to threat her with increased respect.
7、It is high time that...
例句：It is high time that the issue were to be solved so as to promote the economic development.
8、 We should do our best in eliminating...
例句：We should do our best in eliminating air pollution.
9、The problem is not...; the problem is...
例句：The problem is not that we cannot do it; the problem is that we hate to do such nasty things.
10、In order to..., we must...
例句：In order to make our world a better place in which to live, we must learn to live in harmony with all wildlife species.
11、All the above evidence/experience/ facts goes to show that...
例句：All the above evidence goes to show that the birth of computer has benefited our life greatly.
12、No surprising/ It is apparent that the task of...demands/requires/deserves immediate/serious/considerable attention/consideration.
例句：It is, therefore, apparent that the task of fighting against corruption requires considerable consideration now.
13、We can come to the conclusion that...
例句：We can come to the conclusion that living on campus is the best way of learning independence, and of understanding other people and society at large.
14、 We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future..
例句：We then have reasons to be confident that in the near future, no child is forced out of school because of poverty.
15、 My suggestion is that...; otherwise...
例句：My suggestion is that effective measures should be taken to check population growth; otherwise, the potential consequences are unimaginable.
16、As for me, I have always been taking care to... So, I...
例句：As for me, I have always been taking care to choose a goal and a right path before doing anything important. Then I will work hard and perseveringly. So, I have made some achievements and I will do better.
17、 So I believe a...tomorrow...will be achieved through efforts of every person.
例句：So I believe a safe tomorrow of less car accidents will be achieved through efforts of every person.
18、 Therefore, we should not only...but...as well.
例句：Therefore, we should not only realize that competition and cooperation, like two sides of the coin, have to go hand in hand, but fix more attention on how to make full use of cooperation as well.
19、In short, ...are the major problems to be solved to...
例句：In short, shortage of water, decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution are the major problems to be solved to increase grain production.
20、Who is to say that...?
例句：Who is to say that our scientists may not provide a better theory?
2021考研英语：作文该替换的高级词汇
一、单词
刻意的 intentional; on purpose; intended
无资格的 disqualified
无数 innumerable; countless
非常多(大)的tremendous
过时的outdated; antiquated; outmoded; obsolete; anachronistic
短暂的 ephemeral; transitory; transient; short-lived
不合时宜的 anachronism
可持久的 durable; able to stand wear; last a long time
一再 time after time; again and again
初始的 preliminary
前述的 aforementioned; aforesaid; former
限制 limit; restrict; refrain; restrain; keep within limits; confine; keep in check
说服 convince; persuade; cause to believe
具体的 specific; concrete; tangible
年轻人 young people; youngster; youth; young adult
时常 often; frequently; repeatedly
永远的 eternal; perpetual; lasting throughout life
支持 support; endorse; back up; uphold
谴责 condemn; express strong disapproval of
错的 mistaken; erroneous; wrong incorrect
错事 wrongdoing; had acts; misbehavior
不会犯错的 infallible
一致的 unanimous; in complete agreement
不恰当 inappropriate; improper; unsuitable; inadequate
批判 criticize; blame; find fault with; make judgments of the merits and faults of…
有用的 useful; of use; serviceable; good for; instrumental; productive
有意义的 meaningful; fulfilling
否定 deny; withhold; negate
承认 admit; acknowledge; confess; concede
二、短语句型
费时间去了解…… take time to acquaint oneself with…
……是此问题的核心 …is at the root of the issue
无法估计 is beyond calculation; incalculable
一些 a range of; a variety of; a series of; an array of
许多 plenty of; many; much; a great deal of; a lot of; ample
依序列举 list in sequence
自古到今 from ancient times to the present day; down through the ages
一般而言 in general; generally speaking; by and large
满于现状 be happy with what you are
预测未来 project into the future
另一个观点是…… another way of looking at the matter is…
不宜取笑…… it is not decent to make fun of…
评估社会文化因素 assess (evaluate) sociocultural factors
那并非说…… that does not mean that…
那有这回事 there is no such thing as
一个有待克服的困难是…… a major hurdle for us to overcome is…
由……造成 caused by; attributable to; due to; resulting from
由……组成 is made up of…; is comprised of; consist
必须从两方面考虑此问题 this problem needs to be considered on two dimensions:
一般人认为…… conventional wisdom suggests that…
这方法有陷阱 the method had pitfalls:
偶尔 from time to time; now and then; once in a while; at times
重整办事优先顺序 reshape priorities
一次就可完成的事 one-time event
做相反的 do the reverse of; do the opposite
归咎 blame…on; put the blame on …; …is to blame
目前 so far; by far
老式的 old-fashioned; out of date; dated
瓦解 disintegrate; break up; separate into small parts
支持某一方 in favor of; on the side of
意见不和 clashes of opinion
我们想念…… we are convinced that…; we are certain that..
我愿意 I incline to; I am inclined to; I am willing to; I tend to
他们不愿承认这一点 they have always been reluctant to admit this…
在大家同意下 by common consent of…
于事无补 of no help; of no avail; no use
使……受益 benefit…; do good to…; is good for…; is of great benefit to…
想法 frame of mind; mind set; the way one is thinking
想出，找出 come up with; find out
利用 use; take advantage of
推荐阅读：
| 考研英语大纲 | 考研英语词汇 | 英语作文万能句子 | 考研英语真题 | 考研英语作文 | 考研复试英语 |