出国留学网托福作文

托福作文

出国留学网专题频道托福作文栏目,提供与托福作文相关的所有资讯,希望我们所做的能让您感到满意! 托福写作要求考生有效地阐明主题,千万不要跑题。逻辑条理清楚明确。论据一定要具体,且对论点有支持作用,而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度。

托福优秀作文:古人比现在更友好

 

  如何提升自己的托福写作能力呢?我相信很多同学都有这个疑惑,其实看看别人的优秀托福作文是非常不错的一个方法,那么接下来就和出国留学网来看看托福优秀作文:古人比现在更友好?

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  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People are more friendly in the past than today.

  Some will say that the past is unduly romanticized as a friendlier time—that people couldn't have been much better-disposed than they are today. But I’m not so sure. There are a number of reasons why people may have been more genial back in the day.

  For one thing, people in the past interacted with each other in person more than we do today, and this naturally resulted in a comparatively higher level of friendliness. The reason people interacted more was because they had fewer technological distractions. Back then, it was both routine and enjoyable to shoot the breeze with others while waiting for a trolley or sitting on your front porch after work. Socializing face to face with complete strangers was commonplace. Nowadays, however, people have all sorts of devices like smart phones, e-readers, and iPods that draw them into their own private worlds even while out in public. While taking the subway to work, you’ll rarely see two people strangers talking unless it’s to yell at each other. More likely, they’ll be totally absorbed by the miniature screens in front of them.

  For another thing...

托福作文怎么样才能得高分

 

  因为一直以来我国的作文和国外的作文有区别,所以很多同学托福作文的得分比较低,其实托福作文想要提升还是比较快的,那么接下来就和出国留学网来看看托福作文怎么样才能得高分?

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  托福写作考察的话题相对GRE来讲,不管是从问法还是内容,都趋向于生活化。那么话题简单,不代表我们应该写得也简单,因为写得简单就体现不出我们的深度分析能力或者说是亮点,换言之,独立写作话题作为controversial issues,我们需要分析出它的complexity。那么所谓的逻辑推理能力,我们要符合老美的线性思维特点,从A到B, 中间要一步推一步,从A最终走到B。

  我们来看一个例子。

  Topic: Since the world is busy and crowded, people don't need to be polite to others. Agree or disagree?

  One paragraph from my student:

  Being polite improves our relationships and thus increases our efficiency. Indeed, we have to pay more cost to deal with a lot of people such as roommates, classmates, workmates and new friends, which seems that if we don't have to treat these relationships politely, it could save more time and energy to focus on something more productive such as our own business, career or habits. However, politeness can be a tool used to show our friendliness and respect to others, and they usually do the same to us, which help us to save our time and energy to ensure things well. If we need help, we couldn't expect that we are yelling someone rudely and at the same time ask him to do us a favor.

  这一段学生写的观点还是可以的,我们来看一下这样一段还可以怎样去写,从而在内容和语言上更好地体现我们的亮点。

  Nobody can deny that we can benefit from showing courtesy. On one hand, the competition in modern society ...

托福作文两个fair的分数是多少

 

  托福作文对于很多同学来说都是非常难的,那么如何写好托福作文呢?下面就和出国留学网的小编一起来看看托福作文两个fair的分数是多少?

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  托福作文简介:

  托福写作要求考生有效地阐明主题,千万不要跑题。

  逻辑条理清楚明确。论据一定要具体,且对论点有支持作用,而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。

  通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度。

  是新托福考试(iBT)的写作部分包括两篇作文,第一篇为综合写作(integrated writing),写作时间20分钟。

  第二篇为独立写作,写作时间30分钟。每篇作文的满分为15分,合计30分。

  托福作文两个fair的分数是:

  fair的范围是2.5-3.5分。

  那么两个fair自己就是5.0-7.0之间。

  推荐阅读:

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  2018年托福听力考试时间是多少

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托福作文考试字数要求是多少

 

  准备托福考试的同学们对于托福作文考试的字数要求有没有了解呢?下面就和出国留学网来看看托福作文考试字数要求是多少?

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  托福写作多少字合适?字数在很大程度上能体现内容的充实度,而内容充分展开是托福写作的要求之一,于是有人就认为字数越多越好。我们在练习写作的时候,确实应该留意自 己的作文字数,字数过少就极有可能内容没有展开,我们需要考虑再丰富一下作文内容。但是我们同样需要记住,考试考查的是内容的充实度,而非字数。如果内容 已经完整,则无需硬是增加字数,多写就有可能多错。

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  官方明确指出独立写作一篇大概要 300 词,即使把作文写到 300-400 词,如果内容空洞,也只能获得 1-2 分。实际上,一篇托福作文,如果内容充分展开了,是不会出现字数不够的情况的。我们可以把字数看成是内容完整性的提示,但是切勿舍本逐末,盲目追求字数多。  

  推荐阅读:

  托福写作字数的要求是什么

  2018年托福听力考试时间是多少

  

30分钟如何写出优秀托福作文

 

  如何在30分钟内快速写完文章并且是一篇优秀的托福写作文章,其实在熟悉了考场写作3个步骤的时间分配后会更容易实现。和出国留学网小编一起来看看30分钟如何写出优秀托福作文。

  第一步:审题、确定立场、列出理由(只需要在草稿纸上用英文单词或汉语列出各个理由,防止遗忘),最少3分钟最多5分钟。要避免两个极端:

  a.用时太少,理由没有想清楚就开始写,不仅造成文章逻辑结构不清,还会引起行文中频繁的修正,欲速则不达;

  b.用时太多,不要追求一次思考就能把每一条理由及相关例证都想出来。其实想出两条之后就可以动笔,各个理由的例证可以写到该段时边思考边进行托福写作。这一点你不必怀疑,只要你的思维还是正常的,一定能做到。

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  第二步:正文托福写作最少22分钟最多26分钟:

  a.各段写作时注意对段落的不同部分给予不同的重视。主题句给予最大重视,注意炼句,别说你不想写主题句,主题句可以使读者和笔者本人更清晰该段落写什么。各段中支持性细节写作不必遵循相同的模式。

  有n种选择可供参考:1.举具体事例 2.说对方相对缺点 3.使用数据 4.使用假想例子 5.使用类比、比喻、引用等修辞手段来论述。哪一种你最容易想出来,就用哪一种。

  b.考前将文章开头、结尾、例证、让步等各种句型背熟练,并且练习和模考时把他们用熟,要象做完型填空一样对待考场作文。别试图在考场上再去临时决定比如哪种开头好,怎样结尾好。使用自己选种的套话。

  c.当被告知还有5分钟结束时,一般你应该已经写到最后一条理由,或者已经在做结尾。要确保文章有结尾段(不排除将它和最后一条理由的末段结合在一起的可能性)。

  第三步:检查需要1-3分钟,有侧重点地检查:

  a.句法:确保每句话是完整的,有谓语,且简单句只有一个谓语。

  b.时态:文章绝大部分使用的是一般现在时;一般现在时第三人称要使用单数;使用过去发生的事例时用的是过去时;

  以上就是如何在30分钟内进行高效的托福写作的技巧,希望对各位考生的托福写作有所帮助。

  c.主谓一致

  按此三步,持续练习5篇以上,可以确保时间问题。

  如何在30分钟行文的整个过程中保持书面整洁:

  要求必须用铅笔写作文,你要自己准备好铅笔和橡皮。橡皮要有韧性,太硬会擦破纸,有错误要擦干净再改;

  B.第一遍写作时要求字迹不要太大也不要太小,通常一行写10-12个左右单词为宜。如果书法不好,可以在考前练习写一下斜体的26个字母。

  推荐阅读:

托福写作真题范文欣赏

 

  多看看一些高分托福真题写作,学习他们的用词遣句,对于自己的分数提高还是有很大帮助的,那么今天就和出国留学网来了解一下托福写作真题范文欣赏。

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  Distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom learning. Agree or disagree?

  With the advent of computer technology, especially the internet, more and more students choose to take their courses online for a brand-new learning experience. On the other hand, the traditional classroom learning seems to be facing more challenges. Is online education feasible? Yes. And probably good as well. Will classroom learning be displaced? I believe not.

  To be frank, online education provides fresh learning experience unheard of before. The most distinct benefit comes from a flexible schedule. Students, especially adults with part-time jobs or even full-time jobs, take full advantage of this point. They are now free to choose any program that fits into their daily schedule. Compared with the traditional idea of “going to school”, this is better illustrated as “the school is going to you”. Another obvious advantage is the multi-media learning platform. Computer technology promises vivid short plays, detailed lectures and even games designed for the course, all of which appeal to students a great deal.

  However, it is clear to me that online education has certain innate setbacks whi...

满分托福作文是怎么写的

 

  对于很多想出国留学的同学来说,那么可能需要考托福,那么今天就和出国留学网的小编一起来看看满分托福作文是怎么写的?

  一、托福写作文章结构

  按题材划分,独立任务一般都是属于议论文的,而论点、理由、论据、还有结论和论证是议论文的五个要素。具体来说,“论点”其实就是文章的核心,“理由”其实就是论点成立的依据,以及两者构成的因果关系;“论据”其实是对理由的具体解释,多为事例;“结论”其实是对观点的重申,两者一脉相承、头尾呼应;而在整个写作过程当中其实就是一个“论证”的过程。

  要想作文得高分,这上面老师所说的五要素就必须要做到面面俱到。

  二、托福写作文章内容

  这里老师以饮食为例,作者举例说,以前食品都是由政府来分配的,数量有限制,所以人们不能随心所欲买到需要的食品;但是现在的话就大不一样了,在超市里人们完全可以买到任何所需物品。这种新旧对比,能够更鲜明的表现出现代社会物资丰富、还有人们的选择权增加,由此就可以推断出人们的生活变得更便捷、舒适,从而证明论点。

  三、托福写作文章语言

  一篇高分作文首先在语言上,必须要保证语法的使用是正确的,用词恰当,这样的话才能够准确的达意。在此基础上同时还可以追求更多样、高级的表达。例如,你可以在文章开头表现出一种“社会发展迅速,导致人们的生活发生了天翻地覆的变化”这一含义。

  以上就是小编为大家带来的托福满分作文的3个要素,大家的托福写作中这3个要素都满足吗?如果还没有达到,现在就加进入你的托福作文,托福满分作文就离你不远了。

  推荐阅读:

  托福写作如何扩充

  托福满分范文写得怎么样

  

2018年4月21日托福作文机经整理

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  对于很多准备考托福的同学来说,不知道准备得怎么样呢?今天就和出国留学网的小编一起来了解一下2018年4月21日托福作文机经整理。

  综合

  阅读:批评在电视上给药打广告。

  1.无法让人们form an objective view of the medicine

  2.广告使消费者misuse被宣传的药物,消费者会去找doctor开这种实际上他们不需要的药。

  3.政府虽然已经对药品广告有了一定的规范,但这是不够的。认为政府应该对广告有更多的control因为现在的rule不够,保护消费者利益。

  听力:反驳

  1.教授说人们看了广告之后可以自己上 网调查并且和doctor讨论,最后form a good idea.

  2.不一定会导致消费者misuse药物,比如有一种nicotin patches药物帮助戒烟,做了广告帮助了人们戒烟,效果正能量max。

  3.广告有问题的话政府会收到,complaints然后惩罚违反规则的公司,比如可以罚款。

  独立

  Do you agree and disagree it is difficult for teachers to be both popular(well-liked) and effective to help students learning.

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托福写作范文欣赏:你想发明什么东西

 

  对于准备雅思考试的人们来说,不知道准备得怎么样呢/那么今天就和出国留学网的小编一起来了解一下托福写作范文欣赏:你想发明什么东西?

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  If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.

  托福写作模板范文参考:

  I live in a place where the environment is being degraded alarmingly and the desert is expanding rapidly. Subsequently, the people around here are suffering a lot from this vicious environmental vicissitude. So to change the current situation is a great challenge for the people living here. I believe to invent an electronic plant grower is significant to curb the environmental degradation.

  Firstly, weather condition is too severe to grow any plants here. It is not efficient for us to afforest in such a vast area either. Furthermore, if the plants could not get the basic supplies like water, amicable weather conditions, it is almost impossible for plants to survive. The invention of electronic plant grower could be scientific enough, when it plants grass or trees, it will automatically put solid ice and other trace elements which could enhance the viability of plants. Thus, the newly planted plants could easily survive in it.

  Secondly, the electronic plant grower could do a lot of onerous works in the field and tolerate unfavorable weather. It can extend to the m...

4种高分托福作文开头方式以及示例

 

  俗话说“好的开始是成功的一半”,用在托福写作上也是一样的,那么今天就和出国留学网的小编一起来了解一下4种高分作文开头方式以及示例。

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  1、用副词开头

  (1) 副词修饰全句

  Luckily, he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me.

  Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester.

  Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.

  修饰全句常用的副词有:

  obviously / undoubtedly

  apparently / fortunately

  clearly / unfortunately

  incredibly / luckily

  unluckily / surprisingly

  frighteningly

  这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法,在意思上相等与 “It is ... 形容词that ...” 。

  举个例子:

  Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test.

  Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.

  (2) 强调副词

  Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.

  Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street.

  Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.

  (3) 副词表示某一领域

  Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world.

  Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.

  2、用插入语开头

  表示说话人的态度,或使句子的意思更加准确

  Strangely enough, Jenni...