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To：Emma@help.com
Subject：Ask for your help
Dear Emma，
I have a problem and I need your help.My parents are really strict and never let me do anything! For example.when I go out with my friends，my mom always asks，"Where are you going? Who are you going with?" My parents want to control everything I do.I try to talk to them，but they don't listen.They say，"This is our house and these are our rules."
Why is it so hard for them to understand me?
Josh
假设你是 Emma，你的笔友 Josh 给你写了一封电子邮件，向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示，给 Josh 回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法，再给出建议，并适当发挥。 提示：1.内容要点：(1) 看法：在父母看来，我们仍是孩子;父母这样做是为了保护我们。
(2) 建议：给父母写信谈谈你的想法;主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。
2.回信应包括以上所有提示的信息，做到行文连贯，不要逐字翻译。
3.词数：不少于 80。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Josh，
Thanks for your e-mail.I have ever had the same experience.I even had a fight with my parents.But now，I understand them.______.
I hope this helps!
Emma
名师解析
1.试题解读
本次写作任务要求写一封电子邮件，具有鲜明的时代气息，属于应用文体裁。因格式已给出，因此本次写作的关键应放在结构的安排和语言的组织上。就邮件内容而言，本文要求写一封建议信。此题要点明晰，容易成文，因此考生可根据题目中的内容要点合理地整合信息，在表达上要注意句子衔接自然、语言流畅。
2.写作信息要点
(1) 告诉 Josh 自己对他所面对问题的具体看法：在父母看来，我们仍是孩子;父母这样做是为了保护我们。
(2) 给 Josh 提出解决问题的具体建议：给父母写信谈谈你的想法;主动帮你父母做些力所能及的事情。
(3) 自然地给出结尾。
标准范文
Dear Josh，
Thanks for your e-mail.I have ever had the same experience.I even had a fight with my parents.But now，I understand them.We are growing up，but often，it's hard for our parents to see this.To them，we are still children and they want to protect us.
Sometimes，it's hard for you to talk to your parents.Here's an idea：Write your mother and father a letter.In the letter，tell your parents what you are thinking about.Then maybe they will understand you better.After your parents read the letter，try to talk to them.In your free time，you'd better do something you can to help your parents.For example，you can help your parents with some housework.
What's more，you can describe your friends to your parents and tell them more about you and your life.
I hope this helps!
Emma
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