中考英语作文的各个环节不到位，只能说文章写的不精彩，属于结构的问题。但句中语法上错误百出，甚至出现单词拼写错误，就不可原谅，因为作文对语法的要求是硬性的，为此而失分太令人遗憾。
Dear Jim,
亲爱的吉姆，
Last Sunday my classmates and I went to Xiangshan Park.
上周日我和我的同学去了香山公园。
We met at 7 o'clock at the school gate. The weather in Beijing that day was great. At around 8 o'clock, we arrived at Xiangshan Park. There is a high tree on the bottom of the hill. We had a party and played games under the tree. Then we climbed to the top of Xiangshan Mountain. It was not very difficult for us to do it. Next, we had lunch at the top of the hill. It was delicious. After lunch, we saw some birds. They were friendly. And we saw a whole picture of Beijing. "What a beautiful city!" I said. At that moment, we all felt so proud. I live in Beijing now. The 2008 Olympic games was held here.
我们七点在校门口集合。那天北京的天气很好。八点左右，我们就抵达香山公园。在山脚下有一棵高高的树。我们在树下开了一个聚会，玩游戏。然后我们爬上香山的山顶。对我们来说并不是很难。接下来，我们在山顶上吃午饭。很美味。午饭后，我们看见了一些鸟。它们很友好。我们看到了北京的全貌。”真是一个美丽的城市!”我说道。在那一刻，我们都感到非常的骄傲。我现在住在北京。2008届奥运会将在这里举行。
I hope you can visit to Beijing in the future and I am sure you’ll like here.
希望将来你可以来参观北京，我肯定你一定会喜欢的。
Best wishes.
最好的祝福
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
李明
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