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  英语作文在高考中占很大比例,为了方便大家备考,出国留学网为大家提供高考英语作文写作指导  和高考满分作文几篇!希望可以帮你在高考中取得好成绩!

  高考英语作文写作指导

  一、写作指导  

  叙事类记叙文通常要将时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等六个要素交代清楚。好的记叙文具  有描述事件具体、人物逼真形象、故事生动感人、材料表现中心和写作主旨明确等特征。高

  考英语基础写作中的叙事类短文也需要具有记叙文写作的一般特点,但要求相对比较低,其考查重  点在语言运用正确、句子连贯通顺、信息点表述完整等方面。写作时要注意以下几个方面的问题:

  1. 严格按照基础写作的要求完成各个信息点,不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。

  2. 信息点的表述不要完全按照题目所给的顺序,要适当重组信息点。

  3. 记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时,但也要注意灵活运用其它时态。

  4. 叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关,如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等,平时要  注意积累这些方面的词汇和短语。

  二、常用语句  

  1. 表达时间

  a long time ago, at six o’clock in the morning, at the end of, at the weekend,   before he came here, by the end of last term, during the summer holidays, in a few   years’ time, in the past, in the old days, in the past ten years, in August 2002, in   winter vacation, in weekdays, last month, next week, on Sunday morning, on October 1st, since   early in the 20th century, so far, up to now, not…until, while , etc.

  2. 表达地点

  at the crossing, at the end of the street, at the airport, at the village, at the foot   of the mountain, at the bottom, at the top of, be located in, behind the park, be situated in,   five kilometers to the north of Guangzhou, in the south of Guangdong Province, in the middle   of the park, in Class 3 Grade 2, in the front of the bus, in front of the bus, in the tree, in   Guangdong, in China, lies to the west of Sichuan, on the other side of the street, on both   sides of the road, on the east coast of the Pacific Ocean ,on the right, etc.

  3. 表达因果

  as, as a result, because, because of, for, in the end, cause, result in, consequently,   originate from, since, so, therefore, It is clear that… , It turns out to be… ,   The primary reason is … , etc.

  4. 事件话题

  (1)学校生活及学习成绩

  be active in class, be interested in, be interesting to sb., be fond of, be good at ,   be poor at , be tired of one’s work, be weak in, do one’s homework, do sports   after school, do well in; education for all-round development(素质教育), examination-oriented   education system(应试教育), fail in the test, get a doctor’s degree, get on well with   English, get an “A” in the exam, get 90 marks for English, give sb. a passing   grade, have a good command of the language, have eight classes every day, help with each   other, lay a good foundation in, learn…by heart, major in history, make friends with   sb., make progress in, put one’s heart into, pass the examination, study in groups,   succeed in doing sth., take an active part in the activity, take several courses at school,   work out a problem, work on a maths problem , work hard at, etc.

  (2)师生关系及其活动

  be friendly to sb., be kind to sb, be a strict teacher, be strict with one’s   pupils, be strict in one’s work, be satisfied with , blame sb. for sth, correct the   students’ homework carefully, devote all one’s time to work, form a good habit of,   get on well with sb, give advice on, give sb a lot of work , help sb with sth , make   one’s lessons lively and interesting, praise sb for sth., prepare for tomorrow’s   lesson, question sb on, teach sb. English , teach sb how to do sth., etc.

  相关链接:高考  英语作文的一些实用技巧

  (一)掌握技巧:  

  (1)注意篇章结构,合理布局

  开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中  的要点、核心问题。

  正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开  展叙述、讨论。

  结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全  文的总结和概括。

  要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,内容完整、连贯。

  前后呼应,祛除与主题无关的内容.

  (2)确定主题句

  主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常  主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。

  写主题句应注意以下几点:

  ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点

  ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话

  ③主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。

  (二)巧用连接词  

  要想使文章有整

  体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词

  表示罗列增加

  First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing   … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand, Besides /   what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In   particular,

  表示时间顺序

  now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,   at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly,   all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment form now on, from then on, at the same   time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,

  表示解释说明

  now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover furthermore, in   fact, actually

  表示转折关系  

  but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, in   contrast, despite, in spite of, even though, except (for), instead, of course, after all,

  表示并列关系

  or, and, also, too, not only … but also, as well as, both… and, either   …or, neither …nor

  表示因果关系

  because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…, due to…, therefore,   as a result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

  

表示条件关系

  as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

  表示让步关系

  though, although, as, even if, even though, whether …or…, however,   whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where,   when, whom)

  表示举例

  for example, for instance, such as…, take… for example

  表示比较

  be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to)…just   like, just as,

  表示目的

  for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

  表示强调

  in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously,   above all,

  表示概括归纳

  in a word, in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as far   as I know, As we all know, as has been stated,as I have shown, finally, at last, in summary,   in conclusion,

  (三)掌握常用句型:  

  1. in order to

  为了实现他的梦想,他学习非常努力。

  He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.

  2. in order that

  她拼命干活以便到六点时把一切都准备就绪。

  She worked hard in order that everything would be ready by 6 o’clock..

  相关阅读:英语说明文写作技巧

  1.比较对照  

  比较对照有两种,一是逐点比较,二是整块比较,即AB交错或先A后B:

  1)逐点比较:多数人认为这种AB交错的方式可以  避免行文的单调

  沉闷,对比的效果更鲜明突出。如:

  There are basic differences between large and small enterprises. In a small enterprise,   you operated mainly through personal contacts. In a large enterprise, you have established   “policies” , “channels” of organization, and fairly strict procedure.   In the small enterprise you have immediate effectiveness in a very small area. You can see the   effect of your work and of your decisions ground. In the large organization you are normally   taught one thing thoroughly. In the small one the danger is of becoming a Jack-of-all-trades-  but-master-of-none. In the large it is of becoming the man who knows more and more about less   and less.

  2) 整块比较

  It is easy to be a winner. A winner can show his joy publicly. He can laugh and sing   and dance and celebrate his victory. People love to be with winners. Winners are never lonely.   Unlike winners, losers are the lonely ones of the world. It is difficult to face defeat with   dignity. Losers can not show their disappointment publicly. They can not cry or grieve about   their defeat. They may suffer privately, but they must be composed in public. They have   nothing to celebrate and no one to share their sadness.

  2.分类  

  分类是人类认识客观世界的重要手段之一,也是描写事物、解释观点最有效的方式之一。通过将一  事物分类,可使复杂事物变得清晰明了,便于作者阐述自己的观点。

  分类段落的各类排列要条理,可采用从主要到次要,  从次要到主要,从多到少或从少到多等方式排列,亦可平行排列。如:

  1) As far as political views are concerned, people fall into three categories. First   are the conservative people. Conservatives are opposed to sudden or great changes. Second are   the liberal people are in favor of progress and reform. But their opinions often seem to   idealistic. The third type is the moderate people. The moderates keep everything within   reasonable limits. They are more practical in this hard world. In my opinion, most people seem   to belong to this group.

  全国新课标(卷I)2013年高考英语满分作文范文

  假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那  幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:

  李明:高个子,戴眼镜

  航班号:CA985

  到达:8月6日上午11:30

  注意:1. 词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。

  Dear Peter,

  How are you doing?

  I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a   conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for   before.

  Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the   airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in   advance!

  His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall   and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket.

  Looking forward to your reply.

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  全国新课标(卷II)2013年高考英语满分作文范文

  假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要  点包括:

  1. 外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)

  2. 象征意义

  3. 价格

  注意:1. 词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3. 开头已为你写好。

  Dear Tom,

  How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them   myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the   shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In China, these knots stand for   friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them   in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the   knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you!

  上海2013年高考英语满分作文范文

  【真题再现】  

  II. Guided Writing

  Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions   given in Chinese.

  上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展,现就展出场所(博物馆还是社区图书馆)征集公众意见,假设你是王  敏,给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求:

  1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择;

  2. 说明你的理由(从便利性,专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)

  【点评解析】  

  今年英语作文话题贴近生活,考生应该有话可说,但要写好,不仅要有一定的语言功底,还需要对  博物馆和社区图书馆有所了解,否则话语会比较表面化。

这样  的命题对英语教学有较好的导向作用,即学校和家庭要努力提供机会让孩子走出课堂,走向社会。  

  如何写整体框  架:

  考生认真审题后,作文时开章明义,用一句主题句明  确自己的选择(如选择社区图书馆或博物馆),然后另起两段分别就便利性和专业性进行比较,笔墨应重点放在你所选择的地点的优势方面

结尾  部分稍作总结,呼应开头的选择。

  【作文范文】  

  Dear Sir/ Madam,

  I’ve just learned that Shanghai Museum will hold a famous painting exhibition and   you’re responsible for collecting public suggestions about the best location to hold it.   I’m writing this letter to share with you my opinions. As far as I’m concerned, it   is more reasonable to hold thepainting exhibition in Shanghai Museum than in community   libraries. My reasons are as follows.

  On the one hand, it is more convenient for people to reach Shanghai Museum, located in   the center of the city. Visitors can go there by subway,by bus and so on. What’s more,   Shanghai Museum is much more extensive than community libraries, providing visitors with a   more comfortable environmentto appreciate the famous paintings.

  On the other hand, Shanghai Museum, a well-known and distinguished museum both at home   and abroad, is more professional in holding paintingexhibitions. What’s of great   significance is that not only does it provide advanced facilities and high-tech monitors but   also offers professional security guards to protect those famous paintings from being damaged   or stolen in the process of exhibition.

  Consequently, I strongly propose that the painting exhibition is to be held in the   Shanghai Museum.

  Yours,

  Wang Min

  山东2013年高考英语满分作文范文

  【考题再现】  

  假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但  你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件:

  1. 未及时回复的原因;

  2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。

  注意: 1. 次数:120~150;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

  【试题点评】  

  今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯,时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题  ”的大框架中,考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣,以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文,相当于  10年山东卷(道歉信)和07年四川卷(假期安排)和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的,因此套路很完善、  套话很丰富。此外,本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多,因此,

只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法,掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型和过  渡词,并加以针对性训练,这道题目应该不难写

  【经典套路】  

  第一段:问候+写信背景+写信目的

  第二段:“道歉”部分(相当于“写  信背景”)

  第三段:“假期安排”部分  

  第四段:补充说明+客套话

  【高分范文】  

  Dear Tom,

  How are you doing? (问候) You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming   summer vacation.(写信背景) I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay.(写信目的)

  How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was   busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no   choice but to completely focus on my study. I believe that if you were me, you would make the   same choice.(第二段为道歉信常见套路)

  By the way, I have a busy schedule for my summer vacation.(主题句) First and foremost,   I would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.(拓展句1)   Additionally, I will take a short trip to Beijing to take a summer course in the New Oriental   School.(拓展句2) Last but not least, maybe I will work as a volunteer for the school as a   teaching assistant.(拓展句3)

  These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to   your earliest reply.(以合理的客套话结尾)

  辽宁省2013年高考英语满分作文范文

  【2013·辽宁卷】书面表达(满分25分)

  —个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件,介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里  的主要活动。

  1. 写作要点:它是中国的传统节日之一;

  2. 家人团聚;

  3. 赏月、吃月饼;

  4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。

  注意:1.词数100左右;

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3. 开头语已为你写好,不计人总词数。

  参考词汇:中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar

  赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake

  The Mid-Autumn Festival

  The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar   calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity   in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home   for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we   love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky,   we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these   traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our   relatives or friends.

  四川省2013年高考英语满分作文范文

  某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题,请你结合自身学习实际,按一下提示,用英文  为该专栏写一篇稿件。

  1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系;

  2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议;

  3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施

  注意:  

  1. 词数120左右,开头语已为你写好

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

  3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称

  It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits.

  【参考范文】  

  It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good   learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions   to our habits which we develop in our study.

  I’m sure “repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we   want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and   then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How   to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan,   don’t stop.

  When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the   shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then   I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes.

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