但是：＂Simple is the best ＂，试想一下，招生教授天天都要做大量的教学工作，要抽出时间阅读数量可观留学申请资料，有那种简单有力的文章才能HIT THE TARGET，让人印象深刻！我们的理念是简明而有创意的！
Dear Professor xxxx
I am a student， graduated from BaoYang middle school， Nanning， GuangXi autonomous region， in 2006. I am still studying in high school now， because I was not enrolled by the ideal university last year. Recently， I have a dream to study abroad. Then I search online and find that it is more convenient and suitable for me to go to New Zealand for study.
First， New Zealand is a multicultural country， which has the most advanced education in the world. Second， the tuition is lower than other countries’， which I think is mo
re reasonable for me. Finally， the climate of New Zealand is similar with the climate of the South of China. Considering above reasons， I told my parents my plan on going to New Zealand for study， and my parent agreed with me.
As a girl， I like preschool education since I was young. Nowadays， Chinese parents， who want their children to get better education， pay more attention to preschool education. If I study specialized curriculums on preschool education， I will go back China and work hard on preschool education after leaving college.
My plan is as follows： first， I plan to study English in language institute for about a half year in New Zealand. Then， I will study specialized curriculums on preschool education.
I believe I have the ability of study abroad， because I have finished all high school curriculums. Besides， my parents both have job and have rich income， so they will support me to finish my study. After finishing my study， I will return to my homeland and work on preschool education， so as to realize my life value.