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怎样提升托福写作Limited

 

  托福写作在很多中国考生的眼里,想要提升是比较难的,那么接下来就和出国留学网一起来看看怎样提升托福写作Limited?

  托福写作分数段可以分为三个档次,分别是Good,Fair,Limited,其中Limited属于分数最低的部分。

  首先我们来看一下Limited(1.0-2.0)的评分标准

  Your response was judged as limted due to

  Failure to understand the lecture or reading passage;

  Deficiencies in relating the lectrue to the reading passage;and/or

  Many grammatical errors and/or very unclear expressions and sentence strutures.

  Limited分数段为1.0-2.0,对应8-14分。文章特点:没有说清楚听力或阅读的内容;听力和阅读文章的关系表达不清晰,存在很多语法错误,词汇或句式运用不当。

  那么接下来,我们就要看看如何来备考写作,提升自己的水平了。

  一,背,输入永远是输出的基础

  如果不看范文不背好词好句就会永远都是破词、破句、破逻辑没有任何进步。还可能越写越词穷,所以背永远是写的前提。

  但抱着《红宝书》背单词对写作没意义,要背词组,词组包含搭配。还可以在看范文时积累好看的句子、好词。积累并背熟,否则考场上根本写不出。背的越多考场上能想起的就越多,文章也会写的越好。

  二,练习一定要全面

  大家在备考时一定要把各个题型都练习一遍。比如写教育、朋友;再比如环保、科技、甚至古今对比的题材都要有所触及,以防考试时出现没有练习过的题型影响成绩。

  另外,练习要卡好时间,考试时综合写作20分钟,独立写作30分钟。但我要求17分钟综合写完,27分钟独立写完,都要留三分钟检查。这样可以避免手误影响阅卷人读懂文章。但托福有E-rater,大家拼错的词,小语法错误都逃不过e- rater。所以注意减少错误频率,这对于高分来说非常重要。

2019年12月1日托福写作考试预测

 

  托福写作中。大家最不想考的是什么呢,托福考试对很多同学来说都是很重要的一个考试,下面和出国留学网小编一起来看看2019年12月1日托福写作考试预测。

  1.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Children should spend most of the time playing and studying, and they should not be required to do household chores, like cooking or cleaning.

  2.Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus on lecturing and asking students to take notes during lectures. Others believe that teachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them to exchange ideas in class. Which way of teaching do you think is more effective for students' learning?

  3.The best way to improve quality of education is to increase teachers' salaries.

  4.Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?

  5.University students should be required to take basic science classes even if they are not part of the field of the study.

  6.What is the most important factor for students to succeed at university or college?

  1) university tutors' individual instructions to help solve students' problems;

  2) encouragement from family and friends;

2019年11月16日托福写作考试真题及答案

 

  最新一期的托福考试在上周末完美收官,那么你知道真题和答案是怎样的吗?来跟着出国留学网的小编一起看一看2019年11月16日托福写作考试真题及答案。

  综合写作

  探测火星,飞船在赤道着陆好还是极地着陆更好 ?

  阅读:

  1.赤道温度适宜,极地太冷

  2.赤道的自转速度可以作为动力能源利于发射

  3.赤道的阳光可以看清surface

  听力反驳:

  1.重要的不是温度而是温度变化,出道的温度变化大对器材有害

  2.极地可以用当地的冰融化的水是fuel

  3.阳光太足有害眼睛,极地可以做ice shell保护

  独立写作

  与2017年11月4日的题目相似!

  High school teachers (teachers of students ages 14-18) spend most of class time lecturing (speaking) while the students listen and take notes. Other high school teachers spend most of class time on discussion and projects that students are highly involved in and exchange their ideas. Which of these two approaches do you think is more effective for student learning and why?

  立场:discussion and projects- students involved in and exchange ideas好

  1-知识理解深刻:经过分享和讨论会主动去思考知识点,14-18岁的高中生融入自己的理解,这样对知识的理解更加深刻,但是老师一直只灌输成年人的理论知识让学生更加匪夷所思;

  2-增加学习兴趣:在课上学生可以自由讨论,对于14-16岁的学生来说,轻松的上课氛围,在一个自由的氛围中会非常有兴趣和别人分享意见;但是一味听老师讲会让这些teenagers感到很无趣;

  3-加强课堂效率:14-16岁的孩子更愿意和同龄人讨论,这样老师更加能看出上课学生们是否真正理解知识点,而光老师是讲解无法知道学生的接受情况;

  推荐阅读:

  托福写作常见切入点介绍

2019年托福写作素材:瓦特

 

  托福写作离不开素材,而素材的话主要考平时的积累,那么接下来就和出国留学网来看看2019年托福写作素材:瓦特。

  瓦特 (Watt)

  British engineer and inventor who made fundamental improvements in the steam engine, resulting in the modern, high-pressure steam engine (patented 1769).瓦特,詹姆斯1736-1819英国工程师和发明家,他对蒸汽机做出了基础性的改进,使之发展成现代的高压蒸汽机(1769年获得专利)

  参考事迹:提起瓦特,大家都可能认为是蒸汽机的发明家,其实早在瓦特之前,已经有比较粗糙的蒸汽机了,不过经过瓦特的改造,效率大大提高,引发了人类历史上第一次技术革命,推动了工业革命的运行。因为蒸汽机,瓦特从一个一贫如洗的穷小子成了名利双收的人物,他在11年里就获得了76,000 英镑专利税,为了保护自己的专利,他到晚年显得非常不爽,经常到法院起诉,阻止和压制别人的发明,甚至不许自己的助手去试验用蒸汽发动四轮车。这是一个科学家的悲剧,不过对GRE考生来说是好事情,找着专家批了!

  轶事:小时候看到一壶水开了,蒸汽把壶盖冲的扑扑跳,这种常人司空见惯的现象却引起了小瓦特的浓厚兴趣,目不转睛的盯着水壶,忘了把它提下来,为此被大人说成”懒孩子”

  利用点:”The people who make important contributions to society are generally not those who develop their own new ideas, but those who are most gifted at perceiving and coordinating the talents and skills of others.” 以及所有专家,权威的话题。知道成功,不知道怎么利用成功?

  推荐阅读:

  托福写作常见切入点介绍

  2019托福听力加试怎样算分

托福写作考试常用固定搭配一览表

 

  对于托福写作来说,最重要的是对于词汇的使用,一方面是语法,另一方面是固定搭配,那么今天就和出国留学网的小编来看看托福写作考试常用固定搭配一览表。

  能,会,可以:can,(would)be able to,have the chance/opportunity to do..,get to do

  应该:should,be supposed to,shall,have to,must,be required to,it is necessary for sb to

  上升,增加:(vi.)increase,go up,rise,(vt.)increase,raise(n.)growth,rise,increase.

  下降,减少/小:(vt.)decrease,reduce,lower(vi.)decrease,fall,drop,go/come down,decline.(n.)fall,decrease,decline,drop

  变:change,alter,become(different/big/small/..),get,grow

  知道,了解,意识到:know,be aware/concious of,realize,get information about

  证实,表明:show,suggest,indicate,make it clear that

  很大程度上,基本上:greatly,considerably,enormously,significantly,basically

  提高,变好:improve,make better,enhance

  采取(措施):adopt,take

  提出(政策):propose,offer

  废除:eliminate,get rid of,do way with,dispense with

  提供:provide,offer,give

  任务:assignment,job,work,task

  有用,帮助:beneficial,helpful,useful,be a great help to,do good to,bring benefit to,be good for

  方法:way,approach,strategy,method

  观点:idea,belief,view,opinion

  影响:affect(vt.),influence(vt.),have influence/effect/impact on

  (被)允许:allow,permit,can,may,be free to do

  恢复,复原:restore,recover,bring back4

  阻止:prevent,stop,keep(sth/sb from doing sth)

  花费:spend,take,cost,put in,make effort

  参加:join,take part in,participate in,engage in,get involved in,attend,be a part of

  调整,调节:adjust,regulate,con...

2019年11月9日托福写作考试真题及答案

 

  上周结束了最新一起的托福考试,想必大家对真题和答案应该很想知道。来一起跟着出国留学网的小编看看2019年11月9日托福写作考试真题及答案。

  综合写作

  米开朗基罗(Michelangelo)伪造(forged)了laocoon这个塑像。

  1.他伪造过不止一个,这很可能是anot-her forged statue

  2.他有一幅画和雕塑很像,被认为是作为雕像的准备稿

  3.为了钱(financial motivation)

  听力反驳:

  1.年幼无知时(career刚开始的时候)伪造为了出名(获得大家的肯定),出名之后不必伪造(后来大家都认为他有能力,没必要再伪造了)

  2.画有两处和雕塑不同,是巧合。ing是hold left arm,statue是hold right arm (具体哪个hold right/left arm忘了反正就是这个地方不同)2.—个是 strengthen torso另一个是twist torso ,除此之外,还是有不少地方不一样的。

  3.伪造毁名声,太冒险了,没必要。买他画的人都是像国王、皇后之类的。一旦他们出售假的statue,被发现后会让米开朗基罗 lost all his customers and destroy his career.

  独立写作

  Many moviemakers make movies based on books. Some people prefer to read the book before they watch the movie, while other people prefer to watch the movie before they read the book. Which do you prefer?(重复2017年10月28日考题)

  立场:watch the movie before reading

  理由:

  1. 社交:电影越来越流行---和朋友一起先看电影可以和他们一起探讨电影情节,然后一起看书、交流---友情更进一步;对比:先看书的话,在和朋友一起看电影的时候容易剧透---给朋友造成不好的观影体验---对友情不利。

  2. 效率:现在的社会节奏很快---看电影的时间短---能在短时间内就了解80%的内容---如果电影的内容不好,就不会浪费时间去读书---节省很多时间---可以去看别的电影---提高效率;对比:看一本书的时间比电影要久

  3. 让步段:虽然先看电影有很多的好处---但从细节知识方面来说,我们能从书中获取到的知识更多,电影带给观众的更多是直观感受。

  下午场大作文重复2017年7月1日考题

  Which one do you think is the most useful to improve our environment?

  1. Walking or bicycling to reduce driving;

  2. Only consume organic food (reduce pesticide);

  3...

2019年11月9日托福写作考试预测

 

  托福考试就要来了,很多人会搜集网络的预测机经做做,那么有哪些好的机经预测呢?想必是不少出国人士比较关心的问题。和出国留学网一起来看看2019年11月9日托福写作考试预测。

  1Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should not spend a lot of time in communicating by technologies, such as through social media or with text messages?

  2More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

  3Which way do you think is the best way for a student to make new friends?

  -joining a sports team;

  -participating in community activities;

  -traveling

  4Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Drivers should pay a certain amount of fee to be permitted to drive out in traffic in peak traffic hours.

  5Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students do not respect teachers as much as they did in the past.

  6Do you agree or disagree with the statement: Governments have done enough to educate the people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating?

  7Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.

  8Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  9Nowadays the way many people int...

2019年11月2日托福写作考试真题及答案

 

  上周末完成了最新一期的托福考试,大家一定很想知道自己考得怎么样?来和出国留学网看看2019年11月2日托福写作考试真题及答案。

  小作文-natural gas

  阅读:natural gas好

  1.的确清洁的很好,但是太难用了,natural gas 已经是化石燃料中挺不错的了(比coal强)

  2.人们会移走wasterwater到地下,不交汇污染

  3.虽然会带来不好的影响,但是对居民提供的经济发展和就业远大于不好的,居民会乐意引入这样的项目

  听力:natural gas不好

  1.有污染,greenhouse gas(应该用更好的清洁能源:太阳能和风能)

  2.在开采中有toxic wasterwater,会污染河流和饮用水

  3.在开采中会产生噪音和强光扰民

  大作文

  今天的思路来自一位优秀同学的真考回顾以及补充~

  题目:要不要去了解名人的politocal views

  立场:我们不需要去了解名人的political views

  理由:

  1.个性:不了解名人的views 有助于培养你独立思考的能力,从而培养独立的个性;面对一件国家大事或政治话题,没有别人的views干扰你,你可以有自己的思考,然后形成你自己的一些political views。因为知道了你自己就不喜欢思考 可以跟随你崇拜的名人的观点;

  2.健康:对于自己已经有政治观点又很崇拜某个名人的人而言,和他们观点不一样会导致焦虑;

  3.社交:政治是经常被谈论的话题,知道名人的观点就会引用,如果朋友反驳会觉得更冒犯,容易产生冲突,不利于人际关系

...

2019年10月26日托福写作考试真题及答案

 

  托福的最新一期考试,在上周末进行,大家对自己的考试有信心吗?跟着出国留学网的小编来一起看看2019年10月26日托福写作考试真题及答案。

  小作文

  阅读:bird feeders对鸟有害

  1.鸟类大量聚集在一起会增加眼病的概率

  2.增加危险:bird feeder一般设置在家附近,会被家猫等predators捕食,以及逃避时看不到窗户和车窗撞到而死亡

  3.影响migration:因为有了食物鸟就不migration了或者delay migration,或者会让她们没法mate。

  听力

  1.鸟类眼病增加不是因为feeder而是它们经常是一个大group,然后它们经常迁徙或与别的group接触,加快了疾病的传播。

  2.鸟类从feeder中获取影响,是他们stronger and healthier,更好的养育下一代。

  3.影响鸟类迁徙的不是feeder而是sunlight。日照时间变短它们就会迁徙。

  大作文

  今天的大作文题目真的太长了!几乎占了一面!又长又具体!所以这类题目很难用百搭理由去套!可以写一下让步段!

  题目:如果你是一个刚开始找工作的人,以下哪点更能帮助你找到一个successful job。

  ng your friends

  包括现实中和网上的朋友

  ing letters to the company

   for companies advertisements on newspaper

  立场:sending letters

  主体段一:效率

  sending letters 可以让HR更直接的看到你是谁、你能为公司做什么,省去了面试时看简历、提问的时间(因为面试都是有时间限制的),在之后的面试中可以花更多时间让HR全面了解你,拿到offer的几率更大。

  主体段二:asking friends 不靠谱

  朋友可能并没有在他推荐给你的公司工作过,会出现不靠谱的情况。网友甚至都没有见过面,不能保证他的推荐是否靠谱。从你问朋友到等待朋友答复再到去了解这个公司,中间会浪费很多时间。所以不是一个很好的方法

  主体段三:companies advertisements不靠谱

  公司只会把好的信息放在广告上而刻意避免公司本身的缺陷,没有办法让你做出理智的判断。去面试一家并没有广告上吹嘘的那么好的公司是在浪费时间。

  推荐阅读:

  如何提高托福写作考试分数

2019年11月2日托福写作考试预测

 

  为了帮助考生解托福写作考试的疑问,出国留学网托福栏目小编整理了相关的资料,希望可以帮助考生度过考试的难关,下面是小编搜集的2019年11月2日托福写作考试预测。

  1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Children should spend most of the time playing and studying, and they should not be required to do household chores, like cooking or cleaning.

  2. Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus on lecturing and asking students to take notes during lectures. Others believe that teachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them to exchange ideas in class. Which way of teaching do you think is more effective for students' learning?

  3. Some people like to study alone while other prefer to study in a group. Which one do you think is more effective?

  4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: students should be encouraged to take courses like science, technology, engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in.

  5. Schools have always offered students three types of after-school activities. But due to recent limited budgets, they can only support one kind of activities. Which one would you choose? Why?

  1. Sports

  2. Arts

  3. Volunteering (eg. for the community)

  6. People who cannot accept criticism will not succeed working in teams.

  7. It is better for a company to have employees who do as they are told than employees who think of their own id...