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没有个人陈述文书的申请都是不完整的，专家说，一篇好的大学申请陈述应该突出学生的声音和个性，这可能会让很多学生望而却步。如何能写好一份好的申请故事，请看出国留学网下文为大家带来的例子。
但是一些简单的建议，一些自省，以及洞察到了招生官寻找的点，可以帮助自己缓解文书准备压力。USNews编辑了几篇帮助学生入学的大学论文范例。他们说，在招生人员的分享下，这些论文脱颖而出，因为学生们的声音发出光芒，帮助学校更佳了解他们。
马萨诸塞州塔夫茨大学（Tufts University）招生和招生管理主任卡伦•理查森（Karen Richardson）表示：“我们实际上是在倾听学生的声音，并试图描绘出他们在学校生活中的大体形象 这不仅仅是学生选择写的主题，而是他们如何就相关主题进行书写的。我们鼓励学生展示而不是讲述，以帮助读者了解他们是谁。”
专家表示，这篇文章应该让学校了解他或她的性格。
纽约汉密尔顿学院（Hamilton College）负责招生管理的副校长莫尼卡•因泽（Monica Inzer）说：“总的来说，一篇好的陈述应该是能让我了解到有关学生的一些信息，而这些信息是我在申请过程中从其他地方无法了解到的。”
但因泽指出，对许多学生来说，自己发声可能是一个挑战，因为他们的生活经验可能有限。此外，她补充说，到目前为止，他们一直在给高中老师的指示写信，而不是给自己写信。找到自己的声音意味着学生必须了解自己，以权威的方式写作，与招生官员分享他们的生活感受。
在其招生页面上，汉密尔顿列出了该校录取学生所写的多篇大学论文范例，这些例子提供了学生们不同的声音和背景。下面摘录的这篇文章通过对飞蝇钓鱼的热爱，展现了这名学生的个性。
I kept a firm grip on the rainbow trout as I removed the lure from its lip. Then， my heart racing with excitement， I lowered the fish to the water and watched it flash away.
I remained hooked.
I caught that 10-inch fryling five years ago on Fall Creek using a $5 fly rod given to me by my neighbor Gil. The creek is spectacular as it cascades down the 150-foot drop of Ithaca Falls. Only 100-feet further， however， it runs past a decrepit gun factory and underneath a graffitied bridge before flowing adjacent to my high school and out to Cayuga Lake. Aside from the falls， the creek is largely overlooked. Nearly all of the high school students I know who cross that bridge daily do so with no thought of th...
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year. I am very eager to enter the Graduate School of your university next fall to study applied computer for Ph.D. degree.
I would appreciate it very much if you would send me a graduate catalog of your university and any other necessary information, and also a set of application forms for admission. Thank you for your kind assistance.
Sincerely yours,
Wang Feng
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Dear Sir,
I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward Master degree in your university.
My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Huabei University. Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my B.S. degree. I plan to continue my study and research in this field. I chose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your school of Physics. I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the school. And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.
I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, and other relevant information. My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.
I am looking forward to hearing from you s...
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My most important aim for the next few years is to further my studies of History. Studying the subject at GCSE and A Level has extended my interest in Social and European History, and how this relates to world History. The subject has enhanced my understanding and interest of current affairs and contemporary issues, which I enjoy following closely. As a student of History, I aim to extend my analytical and presentational skills. Once given an area to study, I like to research independently, but also working with others. My time at Sixth Form College has enabled me to improve my reliability, punctuality and ability to work individually, while coping with the demands of exams and deadlines. The AS levels I selected; English, Geography, History and Politics complemented each other well, enabling me to use the knowledge of one subject to develop my understanding of another. They have also extended my abilities in research, essay and report writing. My AS results proved pleasing, after analysing my results, they have given me realistic targets for the year ahead. I have evaluated my progress of my first year in order to find weaknesses in exam and study technique and I am working on these for a hopefully successful outcome for the years ahead.
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