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　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
　　Obviously, the earliest teachers we have in our lives in most cases are our parents, and they are generally the most involved in the development and education of their children. Yet neither are all parents good teachers nor are those good parents the best teachers.
　　First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy every thing from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, if their children did not follow the instructions, the children would be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.
　　Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are capable of teaching their chil...

　　How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
　　The impact that modern mass media such as movies or televisions has had on our daily life, and society in general, is undeniable. No doubt it will become even greater as the scope of mass media continues to grow, and as the relevant technologies become more and more sophisticated, and so fascinating that virtually nobody will be able to escape. Already, it can be seen how western movies are exercising influence on our youth generation: they grow long-hair regardless of their sex, commonly part of which are dyed in gold; they wear jeans in each and every season, usually knees of which are deliberately tattered; boys are fond of earrings or other odd pendants; and girls are keen on Marlboros and weird coarse languages.
　　The major means that mass media influence the public is by creating topics of discussion in the society. Mass media offers people (the consumers) issues to talk and think about. Titanic had brought a worldwide uproar by its extolling and of fascinating immortal love; Prime Color and Wag the dog met the national debate on right and duty of the president of the United States. Antiwar movies such as Tears of the Sun and All Quiet On The Western Front among numerous others have been raising the question that is any war really to uphold justice or is it really worthy that an individual makes sacrifices to his countr...

　　It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
　　Both experiences and books are very essential resources, and both of them have relevant merits.
　　Experiences are the most direct resources we ever have. Almost our every basic skill came from experiences, such as walking, articulating, reading even thinking. Without experiences, some natural born abilities even might lose. Studies have shown that a baby who was robbed by animals into forest for 12 years lost his ability to talk in human language. Furthermore, it is generally accepted that each and every skill develops by experiences, and that's why people always say practice makes perfect.
　　Books are valuable when knowledge is beyond the scope of our experiences. Perhaps the most obvious examples are those fluent writers. They write various stories, the scopes of which are far beyond any individual's experiences. Take Joyce Carol Oates for example, her productivity has been prodigious, accumulating in less than two decades to nearly thirty titles, including novels, collections of short stories and verse, plays and literary criticism. Although some of them appear to come from her own direct observations, her dreams, and her fears, much more is clearly from the experiences of others. Her fictive world remains strikingl...

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在奥巴马总统11月16日的讲话中，我们发现了一个非常有趣的现象：总统讲话中有很多内容都和我们雅思写作考试的议论文任务有很大的关联。作为名人的言论，如果我们在写作内容中加入他的讲话内容，自然可以让我们的论证更有说服力。以下是讲话中的内容和雅思议论文中对应的内容说明。

在雅思写作考试中，曾有考到富国是否要帮助发展中或者尚待发展的国家和地区的考题，如：

Should rich countries offer assistance to those underdeveloped and undeveloped ones?

总统讲话中则提到了富国提供帮助的好处：他认为当今世界就是一个相互联系的地球村，该举使得双方受益，无论是帮助方还是接受帮助方。

In 1979, trade between the United States and China stood at roughly $5 billion -- today it tops over $400 billion each year. The commerce affects our people's lives in so many ways. America imports from China many of the computer parts we use, the clothes we wear; and we export to China machinery that helps power your industry. This trade could create even more jobs on both sides of the Pacific, while allowing our people to enjoy a better quality of life. And as demand becomes more balanced, it can lead to even broader prosperity.

I've said many times that I believe that our world is now fundamentally interconnected. The jobs we do, the prosperity we build, the environment we protect, the security that we seek -- all of these things are shared.

总统也提到了体育发展对于全人类的意义，同样，这个内容可以运用于以下这个考题：

Why it is important to develop sports?

总统讲话内容：

And in 1979, the connections among our people were limited. Today, we see the curiosity of those ping-pong players manifested in the ties that are being forged across many sectors.
Yao Ming is just one signal of o...

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雅思写作考试考的是应用语言的能力，而不是考生的思想有多深刻；这句话经常被简化为：雅思写作考的是语言，而不是内容。这句话本身是没有问题的：作为语言考试，雅思的重点在于考生如何使用语言，而不是考生的思维到底有多深刻。然而，我们也许对这句话有这样的误解：考语言，考的就是词汇、语法和句型。

在雅思的评分标准中，第一项就是任务完成（Task Achievement）。这是第一项标准；实际上也是最重要的标准，即，考生是否以及在多大程度上完成了题目所要求的内容。直观地理解，我们会认为这是说文章要扣题。但实际上，除了扣题之外，要达到这一要求我们还需要真正表达出自己的意思来，亦即让考官明白我们真的是回答了文章的问题。

这里有一个程度的问题。比如，雅思考题说，有些人认为大学应该为每个专业招收相同数目的男生和女生。你同意还是不同意这个观点？我们当然知道要达到任务完成的要求，我们要讨论每个专业对性别的要求，不同性别对专业学习和专业水平的影响，这一话题对社会的现实意义，最后得出来自己的结论。但是，在具体论证的时候，我们可能陷入“论证不足”的境地。例如，我们论证不同专业对性别有不同要求，有的考生可能会写：男生的体力和宏观视野比较好，而女性更精于感知和需要耐心的活动。然后就继续论证下一个观点。可是问题在于，SO WHAT？我们当然知道这些，这是一个常识；可是这和题目有什么关系呢？我们看到，这一论据和题目之间并没有建立显著的、可以为人所接受的逻辑联系。我们都明白这一关于性别特点的论述是在暗示（suggest）男女在分工上不一样，所以在专业中追求数量平等是荒谬的。可是，不落实成文字，这句话就没有任何意义。

肯定有人说：这不是涉及到文章内容的吗？为什么会影响评分呢？然而，任何文章的目的都在于交流；交流的原因在于每个人思维都不同；因此，在写作文的时候，我们必须考虑这个文章的读者是不是能够了解我们想说什么。一篇文章如果不能让其他人明白作者的思想，那么就失去了交流的作用，而不能用于交流的文章甚至不能算文章，更遑论得到高分。因此，在我们写雅思作文的时候，一定要抱定一个信念，那就是我们的读者对于我们的知识背景和文化背景一无所知，我们要试图解释我们的思想，就必须从最基本的开始做起，以简单和直白为要。因此，我们必须把我们的每一个观点都说透、说清楚；否则，作文高分永远都是“浮云”。

　  我曾经特爱笑，可是现在我却笑不出声来，因为我是一只小鸟，被一群像野狗一样的小孩抓到。记得，那一次，我停在树枝上，却没有发现自己的身后有一个小男孩，然后抓到了鸟笼，终身困在里面。现在的我像囚犯一样被死死地锁在笼子里。我天生帅气，别人说我像国王。像帅哥。像歌星。那时候我不知道，我有多开心。想要全世界，全宇宙都知道，真不知道什么时候，哪天、几小时、几分钟、几秒钟才能出去。

　　今天早上，我醒来的时候发现自己在鸟笼上面，那时候我觉得自己在发呆，在做梦。我发现钥匙是插在上面的，我做梦也没有想到，自己能出来。于是，我就方向蓝天，享受着大自然的精华，不时，我又发现那几个小孩又在抓蝴蝶和小鸟了，那是快乐成了愤怒。我飞过去，啄了他一口，就像啄木鸟在抓害虫，小男孩立刻逃的无影无踪了。我和我被解救的小鸟结了朋友。于是我们开开心心的飞走了。

　　我感觉到全世界都有笑声，就像一个爆笑王国。

　　　新GRE作文，逻辑能力的要求提高了，那么考生在GRE作文方面应加强备考。以下是新GRE高分作文的一篇技巧分析，希望能给广大考生一些借鉴和参考。
　　The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.

　　"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this period, most of the complaints received from viewers were concerned with our station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night news program have canceled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand our coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
　　Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.

　　思路解析：

　　1、 文章里面抱怨的内容是什么都没有提供，我们不能排除是说天气报告不准确和节目不真实，而不一定是说量不够;

　　2、 late-night news program和广告被撤两者之间是否有因果关系呢。广告被cancel或许是因为公司财力发生问题，或是公司的其他策略有变化;

　　3、 即使这样的改变使得夜间新闻不受观众欢迎，但也不能推广到所有的新闻节目中增加天气和地方新闻的播报。

　　以上这篇文章是考试规划师，根据GRE考生实战而发表在这里的写作高分技巧文章，相信对各位考生会有一定的帮助。


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最近雅思作文高分的好消息频传。想必每个未来的考生都希望自己将来能够像这些学生一样考到理想的分数。对于高分范文的分析能够帮助后来者们了解考试评分标准，达到这个目标。首先要感谢这些考生回忆出自己的高分作文，给后来者莫大的帮助和启迪。

对于这批高分作文的总体印象就是结构清晰、论点论据充分合理、用词准确、句式多变。下面就这几点做以下深入分析。

在谈到英语文体时，我们说每一种文章都是有自己的套路和模式，议论文也一样。一篇议论文首先就要有一篇议论文的结构，反映到雅思考试中，则一般分为等分型（即讨论题目中给出的观点的利弊两方面）以及一面倒型（即旗帜鲜明地赞成该观点的某一方面）。这四位同学使用的写作结构均为等分型。课堂上，曾经有一些学生提出这样的疑问： “老外是不是比较喜欢一面倒的辩论方式？”我想这几位同学的高分作文是对这个问题的最好回答。当然这也不等于说老外比较喜欢等分型。雅思是科学的考试，评分都有严格的标准。只要是好文章，都会得到好分数的。

此外，这些学生都很好地利用上经典套句。比如考生用了Attitudes towards this issue vary greatly，Views on this controversial issue vary greatly，Notions about it vary greatly和People hold diverse views towards it四个异曲同工的句子，表达了“人们对此看法不一”这个概念，然后顺理成章地引出正反双方的观点。

用词的准确性和多变也很值得一提。雅思考题“是否应该加大对肇事司机的惩处力度”。在提到“实施(惩罚)”时，考生用过的动词包括“to impose … on”、“to carry out”和“to enforce”。考题是“经济是否是评价一个国家成功的唯一标准”。在表达经济概念的时候，用过的名词包括“economic factor，economic growth，economic development，domestic economy， a sound economic system”等等。这种用不同的词汇表达同样的意义的能力，是雅思写作标准中对考生明确提出的要求，也是我们一直向学生强调的写作原则。

句式多变也是雅思写作标准中的明确要求之一。我们看看高分同学作文中的句式。考题是“动物实验”，所用的句式包括宾语从句、非限定性定语从句、原因状语从句、条件状语从句、形式主语、并列句等等。而考题是“移民后是否应该抛弃自己原有的文化”，考生所用过的句型包括时间状语从句、条件状语从句、从句做宾语等。文章中突出的一个特点就是形式主语使用次数比较多，而众所周知，形式主语是比较经典的英语句式。

综上所述，这些考生的作文高分的关键在于语言语法的准确。七分的文章必须保证不能出现低级错误，例如单复数、时态，这就是语法基础了。词一定要多变，句式也要变化。背套句、在考试前设计好自己的写作模板非常重要，这样既轻松地用上了经典的句式，又在考试时节省时间。希望后来的考生能够平时多做归纳、多思考，考试的时候就事半功倍了。（Lanny）

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