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2017雅思考试作文经验指导与分享

 

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  一个中心:

  以完成任务为中心。题目中所有的细节必须涉及,所有的问题必须回答。

  两个基本点:

  第一、在考试中,无论遇到哪种类型的书信又或是题目中有任何的具体要求,都要谨记下列的三要素:

  1. 明确的指出自己写信的目的

  2. 清晰、准确的陈述事实

  3. 使用坚定但礼貌的语言(这一点与概述中提及的内容一致)

  在整章中,我会强调每一种类型书信的“目的”:

  如果你写信是要投诉,就用一句话把问题概括,比如:我买的产品不好用;修理工作不彻底;食物太难吃;新租的房子家具太旧等等

  如果你写信寻求帮助,那就清楚的告诉收信人你遇到了什么困难,你需要哪些具体方面的帮助等

  如果你写求职信,那就说明白为什么你比别人强

  总之,一封有着明确“目的”的信,就像是承载着期望的生命。

  下面有三封短信,看看它们都带着什么样的目的(雅思考试中最常见类型)

  NB (提示): 这些书信仅用于了解上述3要素的重要性,但表达地道、文字精准,值得学习;但是正式考试中,除了需要书信的内容,还要提供称谓和落款等内容。

  书信一、写信目的:

  道歉信 (承认错误、表示歉意、请求原谅、寻求解决方案)

  I’m so sorry I missed our appointment for this morning; I got held up in a faculty meeting and could not break away.

  Please call me to reschedule. I am available any weekday except Friday from 2 to 4 P.M., and because I missed our meeting I also am willing to drop by the office any time Saturday if that works better for you.

  My apologies.

  书信二、写信目的:

  抱怨信(描述现象、陈述理由、提出解决)

  I have just moved into Apartment 32B, and am enjoying my stay here. However, I do have a concern about one of my neighbors.

  When I signed my lease it was emphasized to me that there could be no more than two persons living full-time in a studio apart...

雅思作文写作指导:如何抛砖引玉

03-04

标签: 雅思作文指导

 

  Some people think that the fittest and strongest individual and team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

  翻译:

  一些人认为最健康和强壮的个人和运动队能取得体育比赛成功,而另一些人相信成功依靠精神态度。讨论两种观点并给出你的观点。

  抛砖:

  对现代运动而言,没有强壮的身体,根本没有可能取得成功。如果姚明没有身高,刘翔没有速度,那么他们都不可能成为优秀的运动员,成为中国的符号。现代的体育已经非常职业化,业余运动员没有身体天赋,甚至很难生存。

  不过,仅仅有强壮的身体还不够。体育运动的成功,精神力量也很重要,比如强烈的获胜欲望、坚忍不拔、良好的心理素质等等。Tracy McGrady的身体很好,但是总是和kobe Bryant有差距,关键是他没有后者的strong desire to win.

  现代体育中,要想获得胜利,身体和精神态度缺一不可,只有两项都做到极致才能获得最终成功。

雅思作文写作指导:真题+范文+解析

08-06

标签: 雅思 指导

 

IELTS Writing Task :大学文凭与个人成就
University Education and Successful Life
Topic as seen in the U.K., January 2011


真题+范文+解析:

2012年1月英国雅思写作A类真题极为类似2007年托福TWE试题。大意是要考生提出对于大学文凭与个人成功的看法或立场。显然地,主题不是讨论为什么要上大学,也不是比较上大学的利弊,而是要在高学历与高成就的论点上找出立场的冲突。谢振礼老师代表考生发表心图大纲:隐形模板3663起承转合

起--高等教育保障较好的月薪;然而成功发财则靠努力与运气。
承--学位带来就业机会与高薪优势。
转--事业有大成就者未必有文凭。
合--大学教育有助于个人收入;努力与好运才更是成功发财之道。

>Some people think that to have a successful life you have to have a university education, while others think that it is not that important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion based on personal experience and knowledge.


Example Essay: Education and Success
Created by Jeenn Lee Hsieh


Don't confuse a university degree with a successful life, even though higher education can open doors to a range of economic options. It is one thing to make a good living, and yet it is quite another to make a good fortune. In various aspects of life, success is to be measured not so much by the education that one has as by the effort that one makes, plus of course lots of luck.

Undoubtedly, there are some types of success in professional life that are dependent on a university education. You need a colleg...

雅思作文写作指导:以简单句为基础再配合适当的并列句和复杂句

07-11

标签: 雅思 指导

 

句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。

一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理,也起着决定性作用。

总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:

(1) The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句(1)+2)

(2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+简单句)

(3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2) )

(4) There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语短语)

(5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+主句)

(1)和(5)的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?

最后,看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢?

(6) The young pilot was on his first overseas training.

(7) He felt very uneasy.

(a) The young pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy.

(b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training.

(c) The young pilot's first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.

(d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.

(e) The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.

(f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.

(g) B...