历届高考英语满分作文精选及点评（2）

　　【全国卷I】

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　　假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历 2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况 3.承诺：提供最佳服务

　　注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好;可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;生词：申请—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer

　　Dear Sir / Madam:

　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　[名师点评]

　　这篇文章写得非常流畅，把握了所有要点，同时以“我”为中心，详细说明了自己对志愿者工作的结合，以此来表达自己的决心。由于用词恰当，这种表现就比较充分，具备一定的说服力。词汇和语句的运用也不错。

　　[全国卷II]

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　　假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求， 写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。

　　注意：

　　1、字数100左右

　　2、可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯

　　3、开头语已为你写好

　　Dear Bob,

　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. it’s open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

　　There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and I’ll show you around.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li hua

　　[名师点评]

　　本文最大的特点是描绘仔细而生动，意思表达十分契合。文章以短句为主，兼以长句读起来轻快。文章的体系结构也是常用的三段式，作者极力推荐自己的图书馆，这么好的图书馆怎么不打动他的外国朋友呢?

　　【安徽卷】

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　　假设你是李华，作为选派的交流学生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，刚回到国内。回国后，你发现自己的一本英语词典遗忘在他家，因此给他写了一封信，请他帮助寄回词典。信的主要内容如下：

　　感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助

　　一本英语词典忘记带回

　　词典是美国老师送的，非常珍贵

　　词典很可能丢在卧室的书架上

　　邮资自己付

　　注意：

　　1、词数100左右;信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯

　　2、参考词汇：邮资-postage

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,I’ll show you around in turn.

　　However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

　　Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and I’ll be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

　　I’m eager to receive your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　[名师点评]

　　本文作为信件，首先其格式是正确的。既然是应用文，那么文章的意图就要明确表示出来，本文在表达作者写作意图的时候，情真意切，用词委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定语从句，还采用了疑问句，让句式变化而不呆板。

　　【重庆卷】

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　　加拿大高中生David在互联网Internet上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言，文化culture。

　　假设你是李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发一封电子邮件，主要内容包括：

　　你怎样得知David的愿望

　　你愿意成为他的朋友

　　你打算如何帮助他

　　你盼望他的回复

　　注意：

　　1、电子邮件的格式已为你写好

　　2、字数：100词左右

　　3、在答题卡上作答

　　Dear David,

　　I’m a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe I’m your good choice.

　　China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

　　There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. I’ll be looking forward to your reply. I’ll show you around our great China if you come to China.

　　Yours sincerely ,

　　Li hua

　　[名师点评]

　　本文的语言非常流畅，我们可以看到，本文虽没有华丽的辞藻，但是语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。