出国留学网专题频道BEC写作栏目，提供与BEC写作相关的所有资讯，希望我们所做的能让您感到满意！
小伙伴们一起来看看出国留学网英语栏目的小编为大家带来的“BEC写作范文及模版: 非正式邮件”吧~希望对大家有所帮助哦!
首先看一篇非正式邮件~
要求：You are on holiday in London. Write an email to your friend Sarah telling her how you are spending your time.
Sarah’s email address is sarahcar@vmail.com You should write between 320 and 350 words.
To: SarahCar@vmail.com
Subject: London [1]
Hi,
How are you?[2] I’m having a wonderful time here and wish that the holiday will go on forever. Guess where I am at the moment![2] Well[2], I’ve found an internet Café just round the corner from our hostel and I grabbed the opportunity to email you and tell you how I’ve been spending my time here in London.
I’ve[3] been ever so busy the few days I’ve been here trying to visit all the interesting places. On Monday I visited Madame Tussaud’s. This is a waxwork museum. There was such a long queue to enter. Luckily our leader had booked the tickets beforehand. It was so wonderful seeing all those wax figures of so many famous people!
I’ve also visited the Houses of Parliament and Westminster Abbey, two other famous landmarks in London. Tomorrow we’re going on the London Eye, also known as the Millennium Wheel. This is a giant wheel that was built to celebrate the millennium in the year 2000. There are so many other places to visit. But we don’t just visit museums and other interesting places...
小伙伴们一起来看看出国留学网英语栏目的小编为大家带来的“BEC写作解析：这封邮件有何不妥”吧~希望对大家有所帮助哦!
首先看一看这篇邮件请找出其中的问题，然后试着改一改呢~
From: A@rightway.com
Date: 25:7:1-16:06:29
To: B@rightway.com
Subject: REMINDER!!!
John
Appreciate if you would consider and bear in mind that I am no longer responsible for dealing with petty cash. Some of your staff keep bringing their vouchers to me, but this responsibility has been taken over by Martin in Accounts, he is the one who should be contacted henceforth for all petty cash matters.
Your cooperation is appreciated in making sure all your staffs know about this.
BRgs/Sally
下面，试着指出其中的问题~
Subject: REMINDER[a1] !!!
John
Appreciate [a2] if you would consider and bear in mind[a3] that I am no longer responsible[a4] for dealing withpetty[a5] cash. Some ofyour staff[a6] keep bringing their vouchers to me, but this responsibility has been taken over by Martin in Accounts, [a7] he is the one who should be contacted henceforth [a8] for all petty cash matters.
Your [a9] cooperation is appreciated in making sure all your staffs [a10] know about this.
BRgs[a11] /Sally
[a1]这里记得遵循SMART原则。
[a2]措辞唐突生硬，有种趾高气扬的嚣张气焰...这篇信函是ask for cooperation，所以语气更应诚恳和气。同时应该加上明确的主语。
[a3]虽然用的是would，但其实与“你必须记住!”无异。 [a4]这里也比较无礼。
[a5]猜测写信人有可能是升值或者换岗位了，所以不负责现金兑换的事宜。但是语气很高傲…蔑视了之前的这份工作。
[...
要参加2017年商务英语考试的同学们现在就可以准备啦，出国留学网英语栏目为大家带来“BEC写作基本方法和常见错误”，希望对大家有所帮助!
基本方法
通读全文，把握大意
很多考生在做题的时候会遇到不知道是否该删除某个词语的情况，这时应该从全文内容出发，判断其是否多余，通常情况下，都是名词或代词为多，出题者通过增加多余的名词或代词来对考生进行干扰，从而达到测试的目的。先通读全文的另外一个好处就是可以在读的过程中先找出一些明显的错误，这也遵循了我们常说的先易后难的解题规律。
以句子为单位，逐个进行分析
在四六级中，经常是几行才设置一道题目，而BEC则不同，每一行都设置一道题目，因此，一个句子通常都会被拆分成时上下两行。所以，我们做题的时候应该以句子为最小单位，然后对其进行分析，找出其中的错误所在，而不应该仅仅局限于一行对句子进行分析
分析句子成分，找出错误所在
判断一个句子正确与否，通过需要对句子进行语法成分的分析，以判断是缺少语法成分，还是出现多余的语法成分。一个完整的句子通常要包含主语，谓语和宾语。所以我们分析句子的时候也是从主谓宾入手。这就要求学生掌握一定的语法知识，具备分析句子成分的能力。考生应该在平时练习时加强对句子成分的分析。
遵循先易后难，充分利用时间
就考试时间而言，BEC的考试时间要比四六级考试时间长。但是，由于BEC的难度较大，很大一部分考生仍会感到时间不够用。因此，在做题的时候，我们仍要遵循先易后难的原则，争取在最短的时间内拿到做多的分。考生在平时练习的时候也要养成这个习惯，这样就可以避免在考试的时候死扣住一道难题不放，而失去了那些容易的该得分的题目。
常见错误
将泛指内容特指化
这主要是指在名词前加上了多余的定冠词，造成泛指的内容被特指。因为在BEC考试中不存在漏词的情况，因此在名词前缺少冠词的情况是不存在的。当考生遇到复数名词前的定冠词时，可以考虑其是否多余。
例如： The final decision was reached after day-long session of the tests, interviews and exercises. (tests, interviews and exercises均为泛指的内容，而不是某种特有的，专门的tests, interviews and exercises ， 所以在这个句子中，the是多余的。)
时态不正确
对于时态方面的考查，最常见的就是在时间，条件，让步状语从句后用带will的将来时态。我们知道，这些从句要用一般现在时来代替一般将来时。所以，句中的 will往往是多余的。(当然，有时候will表示意愿，用在if条件句中，表示"如果你愿意......"这个要区别对待)
例如： ..., a password allows them to access the system wherever they will happen to be that day. (这是...
BEC写作推荐访问
