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  NO.1

  In the past, people were friendlier than they are today.

  【点睛】:

  【题目大意】:与现在的人们相比,过去的人们更加友好。此题为古今对比题目,上过强化课的同学应该知道,古今对比的题目论证段一定要进行段内比较,而且有常见的几个思考方向:科学水平,生活节奏,人们观念,社会体制等。波波老师建议大家选择同意,原因是人们生活节奏加快和社会竞争变得激烈。

  【具体思路如下】:

  1. 生活节奏加快,人们相处的时间变得极为有限,所以人们变得更加冷漠了。

  With the acceleration of life pace, the time when people can interact with others has been squeezed to a limited amount so that they become more indifferent to others’ business.

  论据:

  The above logic is particularly true of students today. As we know, the increasingly heavy study burden has dramatically decreased the leisure time of students. To be specific, students nowadays are also immersed in various assignments, like group project, quiz and so on. According to a survey conducted by Education Ministry of China, the time students spent on learning in 2014 was more than 8 hours per day, while this figure in 1994 was only 6 hours every day. The great difference in the two figures clearly demonstrate that student’s study time has increased a lot, which in turn decreased their free time. And less free time means that students have less chances to communicate with others and thus become less hospitable.

  2. 竞争变得激烈,人人都是竞争对手,所以人们不如过去友好了。

  Under the increasingly fierce competition in many areas, people become rivalry to each oth...