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同学:
你好!
你在博客评论中说考了两次雅思, 作文都没有到达6分. 而你阅读了不少雅思写作参考书, 你自己也肯定你的结构和参考书上是一致的. 你自己已经回答了你的问题.
你问我为什么你没有考到6分. 参考书可能就是一个致命的原因. 你阅读的参考书有问题. 我没有阅读你说的写作参考书, 所以不对参考书进行评价. 但是根据我的教学经验, 你是读错了书籍. 这好比你发烧了, 就自己随便吃药. 虽然你吃的药物名字也是退烧的, 但是导致发烧的原因太多, 每个药物针对性有限.
写作不能靠着阅读参考书提高, 否则的话我早出版写作书籍了. 出版书籍可以赚钱, 扬名, 但是教学十年多, 为什么我不出书呢? 就是我认为写作参考书实际上更多的是商业而非学术. 北大清华北外南大等等高校内英文高手如云, 随便拉出来几个教授, 水平都比任何培训机构的所谓金牌名师要高出很多, 但是这些教授为什么不出版写作书籍呢? 道理很简单, 大家都知道, 写作不能靠着一本参考书来解决, 而且参考书在很多情况下是有害的.
我不能只告诉你参考书有害, 我还要告诉你什么是有好处的.
我想请你思考以下几个问题:
1. 雅思在过去的三年内都考了什么题目?
2. 这些考题有什么共同特征?
3. 虽然题目每次都有变化, 这些变化背后不变的测试点究竟是什么?
4. 你是否知道要考核你什么语言技能?
5. 针对要考的语言技能, 你做出怎样的应对?
请你思考这些问题, 然后请你大量阅读英文原版的论文, 而不是参考书. 比较容易获得的英文原版论文有TOEFL的阅读理解, GRE 阅读理解, 当然GMAT也不错, 如果这些文章, 你拿出来认真分析十篇, 我想你怎么也不会考不到6分.
说实在的, 雅思作文9分也不过是一种短期训练可以达到的游戏而已. 我没有更多认真研究你的具体问题, 给你提出的解决方案比较笼统, 希望你自己多思多问.
祝你进步
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本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《职业运动员》。
雅思话题作文范文：职业运动员
Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while other think it is unfair.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
范文
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of “fairness” is not the issue.
While those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is inte...
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《G类作文真题大全》。
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v116( g类 2003.2.22日 奥克兰)
task1 u moved to a new city and go to a language school, write a letter to ur friend, about where u r living, why choose that place,ur newschool or class;
task2 gavoernment spend a large mount of money on artistic projects, agree or not), s-discribe a popular tv programme(what type, what the age of people to watch, your feeling
V113(2003.1.31 悉尼 uts )
task 1 you have to write a report for a university lecturer ; a chart shows the number of softwood and hardwood in new south wales, australia, from 1990 to 1998,
task 2:
some people think that university should not provide theoretical knowledge, but to give practical training benefit to society.
do you agree or disagree.
use your own experience and knowledge to support your idea.
v112( g类 2003.2.22日 中国大陆)
task1:你要到新的城市的new school study english.写封信告诉你的朋友，内空必须包括：
1。介绍你住的地方
2。为什么你喜欢你住的地方
3。介绍你的学习的class
task2:政府花大量的钱在public places的painting 上面，有些人反对这样做，认为应该花钱在一些更好的地方。
do you agree or disagree?
V110(2003.2.15日 g类 中国)
task1 you lost a bag of shopping in a museum, write a letter
task2 一些公司认为员工应该经常轮换工作岗位，一些公司认为该让员工一直做他自己的工作，你的认同哪一个？
V105 (g类 2003.1.11日 中国大陆)
writing 00105
task 1:you took a taxi in an english-speak country,. write a letter to the taxi company.
1. what happed
2. describe
3. what do you want to do (maybe?)
task 2: “instead of people get more free time, modern technol...
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《评分标准诠释(Part Two)》。
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The Grading Policy Of IELTS Writing Task2
Make sure your essay is readable. If your essay is easy to read, you can get better marks. The IELTS exam marks for the second writing test are divided into 3 categories:
First, answering the question accurately.
Second, cohesion and coherence.
Third, language appropriateness (grammar, spelling, register etc.). When you see this you understand the importance of spending time thinking about the meaning of the question(answering the question accurately) and organizing your ideas(coherence) before starting to write. Work on these aspects of writing dramatically improves the quality of an answer without even beginning to look at grammar, spelling and register. Therefore, you must keep your ideas simple as this will help with expressing and organizing what you want to say clearly.
注释:
1、register: (linguistics)range of vocabulary, grammar etc used by writers in professional contexts. （语言学）语域，即指在专业领域中作者所使用的词汇，可以理解为与题目相关领域的vocabulary。
2. cohesion: tendency to stick together. 凝聚力，内聚，可以理解为围绕一个中心展开讨论，思路清晰，支持有力，不写与题目无关的东西。
3. coherence: being (of ideas, thoughts, speech, reasoning, etc) connected logically or consistently; easy to understand; clear. 连贯性，一致性。可以理解为观念、思想、言论、推理合乎逻辑；前后一致；让人易懂。
考官改卷的过程一般是这样的：
快速阅卷，并在有错误的地方做记号（不修改），除非在出现相互矛盾或复杂句型错误或英语表达水平很好者而一定要找出不足的情况下才会在卷上留迹。阅完，首先从整体上来判断是否离...
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本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《自私与贪婪》。
雅思话题作文范文：自私与贪婪
Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Someone think that we must return to the olds， more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We are in a selfish world today. We are so busy looking out for number one， so saturated by our own problems， our own issues and our own little and often petty concerns that we failed to see how all could grow and being benefited by working together as a team. As far as I am concerned， the reason of the individual greed and selfishness were actually caused by the faster and faster development and more and more competition of the society.
Some people yearn to return to the old and traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. According to them ， people were more honest and warm-hearted and the manner of traditional treating each other was simple and selfless in the past.
Personally， I do not support this view . Even in the past， greed and selfishness existed in our society. These two factors never disappeared since human have instinctive material needs， individual wants and desires would swell surely with the advances of life and society. Moreover， old tradition has its own limit and could only adapt for a certain period. I believe that the key poi...
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《你能猜到这结尾吗》。
一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的，尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的，但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中，老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。
回顾全文+观点+展望：
这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文，在这种写法中，我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必须的 ，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：
I agree that we need to make sure that animals that are used for testing new products have the minimum of suffering. However, I am convinced that animal testing is necessary, and that it will continue to benefit humans in new and wonderful ways。
上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子：
In conclusion, physical punishment can be a useful method of discipline. However, it should be the last choice for parents. If we want to build a world with less violence we must begin at home, and we must teach our children to be responsible。
大家不难发现，2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对立面用"让步"的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的，加上对于未来的润色，使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法，我们再来看第三个例句：
To sum up, although there are undoubtedly some problems with increased levels of education, I feel strongly that the country can only progress if all its people are educated to the maximum of their ability。
和前2个结尾不同，第三个结尾尽管也是先回顾了全文，但是它将作者的观点和对未来的期望写在了一个条件状语从句里。如此就给出了我们在构造"展望未来"时的一个思路，即搭配条件状语从句或者介宾短语跟在观点句之后。此种结尾发展方式同样适用于分析解决型大作文的结尾段布局，比如：
All inall, although the problem of drugs may seem im...
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《写作基础——语法的提高方法》。
提高雅思写作，学语法好像又枯燥又没意思，不学语法，作文老是要犯错！那么这里就提供一个相对简单的方法，帮助大家提高下写作必备的语法。
首先，以下几个语法点是必须要掌握的，对写作和阅读都有帮助。
1。名词性从句；
2。定语从句；
3。状语从句；
4。非谓语动词；
5。倒装；
6。虚拟语气；
7。强调句；
8。被动语态；
9。同位语；
10。插入语；
11。后置修饰语。
掌握这些语法点，不用把语法书从头到尾仔细揣摩，而是应该从以下三方面提高：
1。大量看例句，然后揣摩为什么可以这样写。这一步其实就是在研究语法的规则，只是切入点是大量的例句，而不是枯燥的语法规则。
2。做些改错练习或语法试题，把学到的语法知识巩固下。
3。做些翻译练习。这个练习才能真正提高写作水平，帮助大家将学到的语法活用起来。
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《雅思大作文中如何举例子》。
一、外显连接
所谓外显连接是指用特定的连接词将相关信息进行连接。通常情况下，例子作为论据由for example, for instance, like, such as, take… as 等引出。
如：it is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways. For example, when an emergency occurs, such as a traffic accident or a violent crime, mobile phones can help the victims to call the police or an ambulance immediately for help.
本例中，for example 引出例子论证“mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.” 而后面的 such as 则引出emergency 的具体形式。For instance 与它的用法完全相同，即后面要接句子例证。 Like, such as, take…as 等直接名词(或相当于名词的词)。由于这些都是基本常识，这里不再赘述。
为了使连接词多样化，建议考生运用下面的一些短语(或句式)连接论点和论据：
…is a case in point;
…serve as a typical example
…can be taken as an example;
one example is that…
another one is that等
如：Working part time when you are studying in university is beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point(or ‘my experiences serve as a typical example’). Through those experiences, I have learned to be independent and responsible.
二、内化连接
实际上，大家看原汁原味的文英文文章会发现有些信息的连接不用外显式，而是通过某些特定的词或者特定的方式给读者以清晰的层次感， 从而使文章信息传递更通畅。
下面我们来看一下哪些例证可以省去连接词，实现内化连接。
1、人物经历作例子
其中的人物可以是名人，Thomas Edison gave us an example that success only comes after persistence and hard work. 也可以是作者自己的亲身经历 I remember that ten years ago cell phones were unusual and seldom seen. 人物经历作例子因为其较强的故事性而引人关注。但是切记，如果运用名人做例证，要注意...
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《抓住要点 简明扼要》。
Agreement: 主语和谓语在人称、数上的一致，关系代词与先行词的一致。
Ambiguity: 尽量不去使用可能引起歧义的词语或句子。
Brief: 文章"简为贵"，要抓住要点，简明扼要。
Coherence: 文理通顺，前后连贯。
Development: 主题的发挥应当充分、合理、正确。
Division: 词汇、句子、段落要分配使用得当，划分要清楚，避免使用重复字句和种子片段。
Figures: 正确合理使用各类修辞格式。
Inflated diction: 不使用做作的语言。
Key: 用适当的关键词突出主题，每段都应有主题句。
Logical: 内容要符合逻辑。
Message: 信息要新鲜、确实、可信。
Omit: 合理删除多余的不必要部分。
Proposition: 主张、观点、论述要清楚肯切、合情入理。
Punctuation: 正确适时使用标点符号。
Relevant: 文章一定要要题。
Sentence pattern: 句型要尽量多样化。
Strait: 开门见山，直来直去。
Style: 文体恰切，适合内容要求。
Tense: 动词时态要正确、一致、变化合理。
Theme: 选题得当，主题突出。
本文来自雅思作文网liuxue86.com《推荐15个最难的雅思作文题目》。 雅思作文考试近年涌现大量的难题。难题的难，体现在很难找到恰当和合理的观点，也体现在相关词汇的缺乏。以下是我总结的雅思作文考试最难的15道题，准备考试的朋友们，不妨看看这些题目，想想观点，试着写写，衡量一下自己的作文能力。
1.Some people think that universities should provide knowledge and skills related to future career. Others think the true function of the university is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. What is your opinion?
2.The unpaid community service should be a necessary part in high college programs (such as helping your neighbor or teaching the children sports or working for the charity).To what extent do you agree or disagree?
3.Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works by using computer. Do you agree or disagree?
4.Some experts say that children’s studying English at primary school is better than their studying English at secondary school. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
5.At present, science is developing at a high speed, but people still have a high opinion of artists. What’s your opinion?
6.More and more measures to improve the security in the urban area have been introduced because of the increased crime. Do the benefits of the measures outweigh the drawbacks?
7.Some people believe that history is little or nothing to people. Others think that people must study history to understand the present. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
8.Earlier technological development ...
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